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4/10/22, 9:15 PM
Keeps getting better with each chapter!
4/9/22, 7:22 PM
Another great chapter. But I find it odd that these guys are spending so much time running around campus naked and even cumming in a public display without the cops getting involved. I sure hope no one has sent a copy of the Dare App to the local campus security and Dared them to ignore anything they see that's the result of a dare. That is, when the hot men in uniform of Campus Security aren't getting dared to do things themselves! (hint, hint :))

4/9/22, 8:19 PM
@Evelded hint taken. Tbh, from my time at university, crazy shit happens all the time. But I can see a scenario in my next chapter where campus security get involved.

4/9/22, 11:07 PM
@GoonNoob Honestly, I just love the idea of cops in uniform being forced to strip or otherwise embarrass themselves. Especially the beefy, crew cut cops you're likely to find working for campus police. And it would give you some different body types and age groups to work with besides undergraduate swim team jocks. :)

4/9/22, 11:25 PM
@GoonNoob I can attest to this. We’d have people drunk out of their minds pushing a cardboard box up a hill at 1:00 PM on a Tuesday afternoon. Most everyone just ignored it. :p

4/10/22, 7:57 PM
@Evelded consider your idea accepted and in development.
4/10/22, 2:12 PM
This was a really griping chapter and honestly did not go the way I expected. I think you really nailed the balance between the soft, romantic moments between Will and Ricky with the confronting scences with Leroy. And I also think you handled those scences very well, they were an interesting play on the absolute power corrupting theme while also being just the right amount of uncomfortable for the reader without becoming off putting. As some other comments have pointed out, it was nice to see a more realistic reaction from the victims and for the perpetrator to face some form of consequences. It actually left me with conflicting feelings, I don't know if I hate the Leroy character or if I liked him, hopefully he has a proper redeption arc and more character development through the course of the story. I'm really enjoying Will and Ricky's character growth, learning to overcome their insecurities and their burgeoning self confidence through their new relationship. Also the focus on a specific element of clothing thorough your stories in a creative style choice that I think is really working so far. I look forward to seeing more speedo scenes as this story progresses. I have no idea where the rest of this story could be going but I'm eager to see happens to Will, Ricky and Leroy going forward and what payback they reap upon the football team. I secretly hoping that it might lead to a positive outcome for all involved and perhaps Will and Ricky might find some like minded individuals amongst their ranks that they build a genuine friendship with or that can join their little group. Please keep up the great work, can't wait to see what you come up with next.

4/10/22, 7:56 PM
@phillipsm i think there's tons of conflict between acknowledging that what Leroy did and what W&R did to him, are wrong but at the same time, the fantasy of it is extremely hot. I'm also glad to add speedos and jockstraps to my thong kink theme lol. Where my last story i knew pretty early where the story would end, with some tweaks as the narrative and characters developed, I really have no idea what kind of ending I want to give this one yet. I know what the climatic dare is (unless i decide to keep going) but how I want to end it is still a mystery. Look forward to finding out myself :)
SklaveTimm
4/10/22, 12:29 PM
Whow, the idea about a mobile app that take controll of your mind is great. I'like the charakters and your writing, too. Waiting for next chapter....

4/10/22, 7:47 PM
thanks @SklaveTimm - writing next chapter as we speak.
4/10/22, 2:19 AM
this was easily the hottest chapter. i wasnt a big fan of the rape aspect of it but glad to see Leroy got his comeuppance and in what a humiliating fashion. i also love the budding romance of William and Ricky, and its always hot to see a straight boy succumbing to the pleasures of bottoming

4/10/22, 7:47 PM
@hypnoguy69 at the end of the day, it's just a fantasy scenario, so like most on GSS, it's best not to think about the moral implications XD. However, it's good to know what readers vibe with in the tone of the story and what doesn't, so thank you. And yes, no straight boy stays straight in my stories... not on my watch... not on my watch.
4/9/22, 2:04 AM
The scene with Jonathan (spotting while weightlifting) was hot, but it didn't feel like you described him much, so tough to say. Sam's description was definitely my favorite of the three, just the right body type.

Rubber_Lover14
4/10/22, 1:34 AM
@amul Thanks for the comment. Ill try to describe them better in future. Side note, I've updated the post to include images of all the characters. I'm note sure if you can see it yet, but that might help in decision making in the future.

4/10/22, 4:53 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 I can see the photos! Changing my vote to the Coach. :sweat_smile:

Rubber_Lover14
4/10/22, 5:33 PM
@amul Off. Well, that's one vote for the coach and 2 for Johnathan. Thanks for letting me know of the change in your vote ^^
4/8/22, 7:00 AM
Hey. @S.Q. Neemie. Do you know when we can expect the next chapter? Dying to know what Will happen next.

4/10/22, 4:28 PM
@Lytcom Working on it. Slowed down a bit because of travel. Thanks for letting me know you're still reading even if the last chapter didn't connect all the dots for you!
Anonymous
4/10/22, 3:15 PM
All this lead up to what ? We need the next chapter!
4/10/22, 2:58 PM
Agree with jacky. And would love an expansion!
hairyartist
4/10/22, 1:25 PM
so hot man, thank you