I enjoyed this kinky reimagining of C&TCF. It, and The Glass Elevator, are among my favourite books. I like your use of magical or mysterious devices and Charlie's revenge on Trevor. i like your writing. I have read one other story you wrote and may read the rest while I'm at it! Thank you!

I found this concept very interesting. I enjoyed how each visit to the virtual world became darker. Thanks for writing this, you're one of my favorite authors.

Having reread this, I’d love to read more, about the device and Matt using it. Maybe a story about a guy who goes to Matt’s company and pays a ton to take care of a rival of his. The rival is there and gets twisted the way the customer wants, but while he’s changing, the customer is changing the same way. Then at the end, he realizes and Matt explains that the rival came to him first and paid more money, and now the guy who thought he was the customer is going to live out his days serving the rival. It’s where my mind went rereading this :)

I really wanna see where this goes, It's intriguing and I like that. Thank you for sharing it with us.

very good story...it reminds me of the movie the girls from Stanford...with Nicole kidman as the main actress...good story and well written

I thought it was horny up until the guy's cock was changed... [*edited by admin*] then I stopped reading. That was an instant turn-off to me.

Such a nice hidden gem which I've just only now discovered. Cute, really hot sex and with a nice romantic happy end! Thank you! Are there any more stories from where you were "much younger" which you should share with us?

Might there be a future as bottom boy and cum dump for the team?

Some explanations and a path forward. QUITE a development. I'm really loving this series. The worldbuilding and the progression of our two protagonists. Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing!

This was such a delightful romp. The contrast between perspectives is so incredible. There's a callousness to Coins and a frivolousness that the rest of society would see so it makes perfect sense. But how fascinating to see the assumed intentions and confirmation bias. Nova sees the party as domineering, degrading, and solely about ownership and sex for their own pleasure. But the reality was about friendliness, bonding, and welcoming and giving Jasper pleasure as well. Exactly the same acts and setup but two different views of it based on the cultures and social situations. This sort of thing is so realistic, and really highlights there is a culture underlying all of this and not just a flimsy excuse for an orgy (not that there's anything wrong with that, but this makes it a part of the world). I was really invested in Callix and Rhys reconciling and the understandable scuffle with Jasper made my stomach drop. Very well played. Not a smooth ride but they did get to talk after when everyone was cooler-headed. Some great dynamics here, too. The various ways favours were granted allowing for everyone at the party to enjoy it. I also really enjoy the casual and natural way sex is understood for Coins. Literally getting a blowjob while having a conversation to calm down from a disagreement. Freely enjoying one another in plain sight of everyone else and it being entirely unremarkable. Incorporating the maze to allow for hiding and favours is such a neat game. And making it a copy of the streets to give Jasper the advantage was pure genius. Both from Aris and Rhys's point of view and also as writers. What a cool element. And he really showed them he was cunning and if they caught him for a favour it was because the god Aphrodite wanted to extend such generosity. Quite a lot of dynamics being played with in this chapter. Including Jasper being a top and even a dom on occasion. He's a versatile little switch. And it seems like Rhys is pleased by this also. So much good stuff, I don't want to go on too long. See you next chapter.