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Maxim1986
12/7/18, 5:18 PM
I'm loving this story so much! Would love to see the newly twinkified Brucie Wayne meet up with Catwoman. Of course the thought of sex with her now repulses the newborn Batboi but she can give him tips for his slutty new costume! Also count me in hoping to see him meet Superman. Brucie can help seduce him and transform him into his slutty twink boifriend Clarkie who the Joker can sell to Lex Luthor maybe?

blu
4/10/22, 8:18 AM
@Maxim1986 I agree also I want to see superman turn Into a slutty boi
Evan
4/10/22, 8:02 AM
This was an insanely hot roleplay between the three. The messing with Ev's mind is part of the fun. He's super into it in general and then the roleplay layer on top (that becomes reality for him). So amazing. I love your work.
4/7/22, 2:30 AM
My only wish for this story is that I had read (and rated) it while the contest was still under way. This was so funny, so sharp, so witty, and sexy. Just a joy from start to finish. And as an author on this site who at times looks at contest themes somewhat askance, dare I say it was also *relatable*? I dare. I dare indeed. Nicely, nicely done!

4/10/22, 5:21 AM
@Noam de Pluma Oh, thank you for your very kind words! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I dare say I had a lot of fun writing it!
SklaveTimm
4/10/22, 5:09 AM
Whow, what a hot Story. My Dick is leaking in his cage.
Xavi
4/3/22, 2:29 AM
All I can say is wow. Hope to see more of him in his teammate's musky clothes, especially a well soiled pair of tighty whities.

4/3/22, 8:27 PM
@Xavi yeah hope he becomes the filthiest musky jock ever and then stays as to coach co-coach helping the coach turn the coming generation into the coach musky jock boys. So he can spend the rest of his love feasting on jock filth and stick and serve his coach! What better way to support the team and the man he owes all the stuff he learned how important humility and team spirit are!

Xavi
4/10/22, 4:47 AM
@GermanSeed There are so many possibilities for our dear star athlete. I would love for him to be a celebrated professional baseball player who becomes the team's plaything after every game. Would also like him to be unable to own clothing ever again and beg musky men for the clothing off their back. I may be dragging on here but I imagine some scene where he's in clean clothes but he starts feeling itchy all over which stops when he strips naked and then begs the clothes off of a group of men who oblige for a price.
Apr 9, 2022
EntrancedGay92
4/10/22, 1:40 AM
This was lovely! I love stories where one part of couple is slowly hypnotized without the other knowing, until it's too late. My one suggestion is that the part where Fredrick "turned" on his husband seemed to happen a bit abruptly, a more gradual build up would have worked better I think.

4/10/22, 4:41 AM
@EntrancedGay92 Yeah, I know it’s aburpt, this was actually a commission I did for someone and the maximum word count was 3,000 so I didn’t want to go over it by too much.
Anonymous
4/10/22, 4:01 AM
Thank ya Jesus!
Anonymous
4/10/22, 3:42 AM
Dude, where's the next chapter(s)? So f'ing hot!!! Give us more.
jayboy711
4/10/22, 3:41 AM
Love this story. And I'm genuinely curious about how it will wrap up. Seems as though it's inevitable that the brothers will reconcile and be together, but then what about Mason? Will they become a triad? Anyway, nicely done, bro~!
Anonymous
4/10/22, 3:23 AM
So hot!! I'm hard as rocks!!!!!!