Recent Comments

3/20/25, 5:01 PM
Great story. Love the premise and the timing of the transition from the football field to the locker room to the arcade was excellent. More, please.

3/21/25, 2:43 PM
@[F150SATX](/user/show/923367) Thanks for the thoughtful comment. There's more swirling around in my head...at least two more parts coming soon :)
Anonymous
3/20/25, 9:31 PM
Wow! What an AMAZING first story! 😧

3/21/25, 2:41 PM
@Anonymous Thank you so much! I really appreciate that.
3/21/25, 3:24 AM
I loved this story. Hope you will do more parts.

3/21/25, 2:41 PM
@Jonanator Thank you! so far two more parts are planned :)
3/21/25, 12:47 PM
What's next for Brandon? I hope plenty more

3/21/25, 2:41 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Brandon's about to get a welcomed surprised ;-)
Joe Sap
3/21/25, 2:11 PM
Excited to see Austin become the good boi he was meant to be.
3/21/25, 3:28 AM
I love your stories! Every time, I'm left wishing for more, but this story must have a continuation! I want to know what will happen to Josh and how he will be transformed

3/21/25, 7:57 AM
@[Hyphyno](/user/show/10059302) I’m glad you liked. University has kind of taken over my time. Because I’m studying Creative Writing. I’d probably want to do this again, edit it down and make it better. I have notes of the story if I want to continue. So you never know.
3/21/25, 7:45 AM
Thanks
3/21/25, 7:23 AM
Glad to see you got back to this one!
Anonymous
3/21/25, 5:41 AM
BWAAAAHHHHH
3/21/25, 5:10 AM
I just discovered this story and read all the chapters published so far. Amazing. This is one of the most well-crafted stories I've read in a long time. And the burn is sooooo slow. I feel like I'm being edged for a period of weeks. I'm definitely interested to see where this goes and how it ends!