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Cutlerfan
4/9/22, 10:53 PM
Congrats on the win! A great Turnabout story indeed.

4/10/22, 1:26 AM
@Cutlerfan Thanks! Glad you liked it!
4/8/22, 1:57 AM
This was amazing! I'm sorry I didn't finish it before the contest ended. I identified very strongly with Roman, even though I'm not Dom, and not exclusively top at all. I don't think I fall on either side of Dom/sub; not even as a switch. But enough of the problems I've had with trying to explore BDSM are similar to his, that it was easy to be in his head as the story progressed. The steps of acceptance he reached seemed familiar, too. The real joy for me was reading the hypnosis sessions, especially the first. I envied Roman the depth he achieved, felt all the pleasure he did, and I'm definitely taking notes from Quinn when I start trying to hypnotize guys myself. Granted my perception was filtered through Roman's, but he seemed to be a perfect tist. And yes, like others who've commented, I really appreciated a hypno story that very much warrants that "realistic" tag. Yours might well be the most realistic I've read on here. Thank you! This was great, and I'll be thinking about everything it stirs up for me for weeks.

4/10/22, 12:57 AM
@meatheadosis Thank you so much for this kind, thoughtful comment! I'm glad the different feelings and themes I was working with were something you could relate to, even if it wasn't exactly your experience. I set out to write as realistic a story as I could while trying to keep the inductions readable and fluid. This kind of induction is closest to my own style as a hypnotist, and I wanted to deal with conflict but not coming out of the nefarious intentions of the hypnotists for his subject, this time. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it and that it felt true and good to you! Thanks for taking the time to comment -- it's definitely great encouragement for future writing!
4/10/22, 12:50 AM
Holy fuck! That was a great chapter! I love your lore building. Thank you.
4/9/22, 7:54 AM
Any timeframe till the next chapter?

4/9/22, 11:16 PM
@Leoscurse Heya, my apologies for the delay. I have been sick with COVID, but the new chapter shall be published shortly!
4/9/22, 10:11 PM
Such a hot addition. I kinda liked Conner, I kinda look forward to more from him! And I love this series. Great job again.
Martin
4/9/22, 7:13 PM
Die Story wird richtig spannend. Ich freu mich schon zu lesen, wie es weitergeht! :hot_pepper:

SklaveTimm
4/9/22, 9:38 PM
@Martin Danke für das positive Feedback. Ich habe nochmal am 1 und 2 Teil (Tite und Layout) ein wenig gefeilt. Und den inzwischen fertigen 3. Teil der Erzählung konnte ich auch schon hochladen.:sweat_drops:
4/9/22, 4:38 PM
Damn this is hot as ever. Glad you came back to it. Hope Mav gets DP'ed next. (I think there might be a small error halfway through, Mav already has three fingers up his pussy and then Conner adds a third - surely it should be a fourth?

4/9/22, 9:03 PM
@Haven thanks, just changed it!
SJ
4/9/22, 9:01 PM
Awesomeness.
Anonymous
4/9/22, 7:47 PM
Hanna's a bitch.
4/9/22, 4:20 PM
This was INCREDIBLE! And I have to say… *finally.* I’ve been on this site for YEARS, and every single time a character gets a taste of power, they end up going off the deep end. Here, at last, is a nuanced exploration of that trend; morally gray characters who don’t become total monsters (but acknowledge the capability to do so); repercussions and discussion about the wrongness of their actions; and forgiveness as opposed to revenge. Of course, Leroy does rape the main characters and that’s sickening, but at the very least it’s ACKNOWLEDGED as horrible and he faces not only immediate repercussions, but also the knowledge that what he did was horrible (so many stories gloss over that element, but you name it, and it’s amazing). And finally, I love how William and Ricky’s relationship is blossoming—you do an incredible job showing that love and mind-blowing sex can coexist. You are truly an amazing writer! :)

4/9/22, 6:54 PM
@Feed Your Head thanks very much. Love that you give detailed feedback as that really fuels my work. I think in the context of this being a GSS and sexual fantasy, I don't judge Leroy too harshly. Power does awful things to people and I learned my lesson from my last series to make sure his punishment was swift and brutal (although I would be turned on being puy into that predicament bondage 😉), plus I think W&R are willing to forgive and forget. Speaking of them, I was actually tempted to have them holding hands on their naked walk back to the dorm, but I thought it would conflict with their plan and be too soon for them romantically. Glare you're still enjoying my stories!