Recent Comments

4/10/22, 12:50 AM
Holy fuck! That was a great chapter! I love your lore building. Thank you.
4/9/22, 7:54 AM
Any timeframe till the next chapter?

4/9/22, 11:16 PM
@Leoscurse Heya, my apologies for the delay. I have been sick with COVID, but the new chapter shall be published shortly!
4/9/22, 10:11 PM
Such a hot addition. I kinda liked Conner, I kinda look forward to more from him! And I love this series. Great job again.
Martin
4/9/22, 7:13 PM
Die Story wird richtig spannend. Ich freu mich schon zu lesen, wie es weitergeht! :hot_pepper:

SklaveTimm
4/9/22, 9:38 PM
@Martin Danke für das positive Feedback. Ich habe nochmal am 1 und 2 Teil (Tite und Layout) ein wenig gefeilt. Und den inzwischen fertigen 3. Teil der Erzählung konnte ich auch schon hochladen.:sweat_drops:
4/9/22, 4:38 PM
Damn this is hot as ever. Glad you came back to it. Hope Mav gets DP'ed next. (I think there might be a small error halfway through, Mav already has three fingers up his pussy and then Conner adds a third - surely it should be a fourth?

4/9/22, 9:03 PM
@Haven thanks, just changed it!
SJ
4/9/22, 9:01 PM
Awesomeness.
Anonymous
4/9/22, 7:47 PM
Hanna's a bitch.
4/9/22, 4:20 PM
This was INCREDIBLE! And I have to say… *finally.* I’ve been on this site for YEARS, and every single time a character gets a taste of power, they end up going off the deep end. Here, at last, is a nuanced exploration of that trend; morally gray characters who don’t become total monsters (but acknowledge the capability to do so); repercussions and discussion about the wrongness of their actions; and forgiveness as opposed to revenge. Of course, Leroy does rape the main characters and that’s sickening, but at the very least it’s ACKNOWLEDGED as horrible and he faces not only immediate repercussions, but also the knowledge that what he did was horrible (so many stories gloss over that element, but you name it, and it’s amazing). And finally, I love how William and Ricky’s relationship is blossoming—you do an incredible job showing that love and mind-blowing sex can coexist. You are truly an amazing writer! :)

4/9/22, 6:54 PM
@Feed Your Head thanks very much. Love that you give detailed feedback as that really fuels my work. I think in the context of this being a GSS and sexual fantasy, I don't judge Leroy too harshly. Power does awful things to people and I learned my lesson from my last series to make sure his punishment was swift and brutal (although I would be turned on being puy into that predicament bondage 😉), plus I think W&R are willing to forgive and forget. Speaking of them, I was actually tempted to have them holding hands on their naked walk back to the dorm, but I thought it would conflict with their plan and be too soon for them romantically. Glare you're still enjoying my stories!
4/9/22, 6:07 PM
"a very human, if thickly furred, set of round, inviting buttocks topped with a cute flag of a goat’s tail." Reminds me of the satyrs in The Discovery of Honey by Bacchus, a painting by Piero di Cosimo https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Discovery_of_Honey_by_Bacchus
4/6/22, 9:30 AM
Really loving this premise and the funloving tone with hints of sinister undercurrents the story had thus far. I think showing Ricky's perspective on the events of the first chapter, as well as his experience of discovering and first using the app, was a really good choice. The more goofy dares intermixed with the humiliating dares and punishments are enjoyable and keeps the story from turning too dark. Excited to see what other punishments and dares the guys will encounter, though I do hope they aren't made to do anything dangerous or that would get them in serious trouble. Also can't wait to see what new characters are going to be introduced and who they may or may not get ensnared by the Dare App as well. If this is what duo dares are like I can't help but wonder what group dares (or punishments) might be.

4/9/22, 3:46 PM
@phillipsm I've learned my lesson not to do anything too extreme and keep things relatively light and sexy. Doesn't mean that there aren't extremely humiliating and perverse dares to come