Recent Comments

Martin
4/9/22, 7:13 PM
Die Story wird richtig spannend. Ich freu mich schon zu lesen, wie es weitergeht! :hot_pepper:

SklaveTimm
4/9/22, 9:38 PM
@Martin Danke für das positive Feedback. Ich habe nochmal am 1 und 2 Teil (Tite und Layout) ein wenig gefeilt. Und den inzwischen fertigen 3. Teil der Erzählung konnte ich auch schon hochladen.:sweat_drops:
4/9/22, 4:38 PM
Damn this is hot as ever. Glad you came back to it. Hope Mav gets DP'ed next. (I think there might be a small error halfway through, Mav already has three fingers up his pussy and then Conner adds a third - surely it should be a fourth?

4/9/22, 9:03 PM
@Haven thanks, just changed it!
SJ
4/9/22, 9:01 PM
Awesomeness.
Anonymous
4/9/22, 7:47 PM
Hanna's a bitch.
4/9/22, 4:20 PM
This was INCREDIBLE! And I have to say… *finally.* I’ve been on this site for YEARS, and every single time a character gets a taste of power, they end up going off the deep end. Here, at last, is a nuanced exploration of that trend; morally gray characters who don’t become total monsters (but acknowledge the capability to do so); repercussions and discussion about the wrongness of their actions; and forgiveness as opposed to revenge. Of course, Leroy does rape the main characters and that’s sickening, but at the very least it’s ACKNOWLEDGED as horrible and he faces not only immediate repercussions, but also the knowledge that what he did was horrible (so many stories gloss over that element, but you name it, and it’s amazing). And finally, I love how William and Ricky’s relationship is blossoming—you do an incredible job showing that love and mind-blowing sex can coexist. You are truly an amazing writer! :)

4/9/22, 6:54 PM
@Feed Your Head thanks very much. Love that you give detailed feedback as that really fuels my work. I think in the context of this being a GSS and sexual fantasy, I don't judge Leroy too harshly. Power does awful things to people and I learned my lesson from my last series to make sure his punishment was swift and brutal (although I would be turned on being puy into that predicament bondage 😉), plus I think W&R are willing to forgive and forget. Speaking of them, I was actually tempted to have them holding hands on their naked walk back to the dorm, but I thought it would conflict with their plan and be too soon for them romantically. Glare you're still enjoying my stories!
4/9/22, 6:07 PM
"a very human, if thickly furred, set of round, inviting buttocks topped with a cute flag of a goat’s tail." Reminds me of the satyrs in The Discovery of Honey by Bacchus, a painting by Piero di Cosimo https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Discovery_of_Honey_by_Bacchus
4/6/22, 9:30 AM
Really loving this premise and the funloving tone with hints of sinister undercurrents the story had thus far. I think showing Ricky's perspective on the events of the first chapter, as well as his experience of discovering and first using the app, was a really good choice. The more goofy dares intermixed with the humiliating dares and punishments are enjoyable and keeps the story from turning too dark. Excited to see what other punishments and dares the guys will encounter, though I do hope they aren't made to do anything dangerous or that would get them in serious trouble. Also can't wait to see what new characters are going to be introduced and who they may or may not get ensnared by the Dare App as well. If this is what duo dares are like I can't help but wonder what group dares (or punishments) might be.

4/9/22, 3:46 PM
@phillipsm I've learned my lesson not to do anything too extreme and keep things relatively light and sexy. Doesn't mean that there aren't extremely humiliating and perverse dares to come
Evan
4/9/22, 4:42 AM
Really loving this series. And lived the call-out to the Thong Bois and their being the inspiration for the embarrassing underwear. Unexpected overload of horny causing a need to get it on right away. But loved it.

4/9/22, 3:44 PM
@Evan maybe a cross-over special in the future? lol
Anonymous
4/6/22, 5:57 AM
Amazing! Really loved this story. The embarrassing underwear and humiliation are huge turn ons for me. Love this a follow up to your last series!

4/9/22, 3:44 PM
@ me too! Gotta work in some thongs somewhere don't I lol
4/6/22, 2:18 AM
What a great chapter! I love the shared universe of the Thong Bros showing up. It’s also nice to have characters reacting realistically to the situation they find themselves in; many stories on this site tend to have the people in them accept the weirdness right away (usually as part of the brainwashing), so it’s fun to see our heroes realizing that the app is messed up. :p And finally, I can’t help but wonder if the higher one gets on the leaderboard, the hornier they become…why else would Will and Ricky suddenly be so overwhelmed with lust that they couldn’t control themselves? I suspect the mystery is just beginning!

4/9/22, 3:43 PM
@Feed Your Head it's like when you watch horror movies and you're like "why don't they do this". I try and cover any loopholes and give characters realistic reactions but are influenced by hypnotic suggestion or just pure horniness. I like the idea of the leaderboard, though just who is the number 1 darer on the list?