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Xavi
4/3/22, 2:29 AM
All I can say is wow. Hope to see more of him in his teammate's musky clothes, especially a well soiled pair of tighty whities.

4/3/22, 8:27 PM
@Xavi yeah hope he becomes the filthiest musky jock ever and then stays as to coach co-coach helping the coach turn the coming generation into the coach musky jock boys. So he can spend the rest of his love feasting on jock filth and stick and serve his coach! What better way to support the team and the man he owes all the stuff he learned how important humility and team spirit are!

Xavi
4/10/22, 4:47 AM
@GermanSeed There are so many possibilities for our dear star athlete. I would love for him to be a celebrated professional baseball player who becomes the team's plaything after every game. Would also like him to be unable to own clothing ever again and beg musky men for the clothing off their back. I may be dragging on here but I imagine some scene where he's in clean clothes but he starts feeling itchy all over which stops when he strips naked and then begs the clothes off of a group of men who oblige for a price.
Apr 9, 2022
EntrancedGay92
4/10/22, 1:40 AM
This was lovely! I love stories where one part of couple is slowly hypnotized without the other knowing, until it's too late. My one suggestion is that the part where Fredrick "turned" on his husband seemed to happen a bit abruptly, a more gradual build up would have worked better I think.

4/10/22, 4:41 AM
@EntrancedGay92 Yeah, I know it’s aburpt, this was actually a commission I did for someone and the maximum word count was 3,000 so I didn’t want to go over it by too much.
Anonymous
4/10/22, 4:01 AM
Thank ya Jesus!
Anonymous
4/10/22, 3:42 AM
Dude, where's the next chapter(s)? So f'ing hot!!! Give us more.
jayboy711
4/10/22, 3:41 AM
Love this story. And I'm genuinely curious about how it will wrap up. Seems as though it's inevitable that the brothers will reconcile and be together, but then what about Mason? Will they become a triad? Anyway, nicely done, bro~!
Anonymous
4/10/22, 3:23 AM
So hot!! I'm hard as rocks!!!!!!
Evan
4/9/22, 6:56 AM
Jasper is really taking to his pet training. I loved the emersion of his submissive side even if it caught Rhys's attention. That said, being so desperate to cum can have that effect so that's a nice little head-canon for Rhys to not be too suspicious. I absolutely LOVE the Golden condition. What an awesome way to introduce some vulnerability to some of the Coins and turn a bit of that submissive desperate need to cum, and loss of control back on its head for them. Just as a way to not be in control of yourself and fall into base instinct of needing to fuck and cum is very hot to me. Even more so when contrasted against their rigid control and protocol normally. The further to fall, I suppose. You are both amazing authors and more impressive is collaboratively writing this. Writing with someone else is even trickier. The voices are distinctive for characters but in no way reveal who is writing whom. I have my theories on the Golden Lattice Ceremony being some sort of debutant-esque event to celebrate and present a new pet, ending in everyone in attendence using or teasing or pleasing the guest of honour in an orgy or something like that. Excited to see how Jasper takes that if I'm right. His programming by Aris is really jumping ahead after using his rig. I fear if he learns of it he may question Jasper's true heart (that I think exists) and whether his affection is just the suggestions and not based on his original feelings. Damn you both tugging at my heart strings.

Cuddle-switch
4/10/22, 3:04 AM
@Evan I’m so glad to hear you are enjoying our story. You are picking up on pretty much all of the important points that we were putting down. For example, yes, the Aureum vesanium is one of the ways we hope to show a type of weakness in the Coins. Perhaps the magnification of desirable qualities can have unintended consequences?? As a new writer, it gives me all the feels to know that you are liking this enough to be reading this thoroughly, and are paying attention to both subtext and the subtle cues from the characters. I’ll be very curious to know what you think of the Golden Lattice Ceremony. Please feel free to comment to your heart’s content. Also, we will continue to pull on those heartstrings as long as you consent to us doing so.

4/10/22, 3:08 AM
@Evan I also really appreciate you taking the time to give us such thorough comments! It's really such a joy as a writer to get the chance to hear from readers (especially friends!) about what they think about the work! :3 I think our preferences align pretty closely with yours on a lot of the decisions we've made that are meant to be sensual or play on kinks. At the end of the day, it's been a bad beginning for Rhys and Jasper. We'll have to see how things turn out for them over time! Thanks again for encouraging us to write!
4/10/22, 2:27 AM
Mav is a goner. That hot Stud reputation is lost to him. But, he just may learn to love the new reputation
4/9/22, 3:48 AM
I say Jonathan, and it would be pretty cool if he actually did stuff with his feet like worship or sniffing

Rubber_Lover14
4/10/22, 1:36 AM
@Mrpomf Yeah, I cant wait to involve more foot worship and stuff like that. And just generally kinkier things. Also, if u wanna see them, I've added images of all the characters to Getting Treatment. So if you'd like to see them all, then you can revisit the chapter ^^ I'm not sure if their on view yet though
Cutlerfan
4/9/22, 10:53 PM
Congrats on the win! A great Turnabout story indeed.

4/10/22, 1:26 AM
@Cutlerfan Thanks! Glad you liked it!