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4/8/22, 3:02 PM
Now, how will the caped crusader get out of this mess?
Apr 2, 2022
4/7/22, 12:39 AM
It's a pretty good start. It is a fantasy story, a bit kinkier than the usual AB/DL "forced into diapers" story but contains a lot of the classic elements that have become the stock and trade for this kink.

4/8/22, 12:00 PM
@amul Hey thanks for your feedback. Yes, it’s definitely kinkier than usual. I’ll see to a second chapter as soon as I can to see where I can take the Story. Always open for ideas!
4/8/22, 11:41 AM
Enjoying this story and looking forward to future chapters.
Evan
4/8/22, 10:30 AM
Wow, what a continuation! This was fantastic. And more to come. The first two chapters were a nice tease, this was a glorious payoff. Can't wait for 5 & 6.
4/8/22, 9:35 AM
I'm still kind of waiting for a sequel to this. This was hot as fuck!
4/8/22, 8:40 AM
Great follow up, so hot!!
4/8/22, 3:49 AM
What a *lovely* story. The romance shone through beautifully, and I love how you managed to make the sex a real expression of their love as much as it was their lust. Plus, as far as the lust goes, I absolutely go nuts for visceral descriptions of what it feels like to be split by an impossibly huge cock, and you nailed it. The visual of Tobias’ stomach bulging around it will stay with me for some time to cum. Nicely, nicely done!

4/8/22, 5:39 AM
I’ve rarely gotten to write stomach-bulging-by-cock in my stories on this site so far, so I relished in it. I’m glad I communicated how visceral it is, even from the top’s perspective! And I’m glad you felt the intimacy between them. I think that’s vital. @Noam de Pluma
4/6/22, 7:25 PM
Just a note: You use the term "pants" in its US sense throughout despite characters being British. A command in the UK to "Take your pants off will you" would see someone remove their underwear.

4/6/22, 7:34 PM
@Envious George JK Rowling uses the term pants in that same book to refer to slacks and not underwear.

4/6/22, 9:50 PM
@Jack Parker Jack, while I do like the story, the above is only one of quite a few Americanisms scattered all the way through. While you might hear some of them used in everyday conversation in Britain, it’d be unlikely anyone would use quite so many οf them in one go. If they did, the intention would almost certainly be ironic.

Anonymous
4/6/22, 9:55 PM
@U.K. guy I am sure you are correct but I am using the word pants in the same manner JK Rowling did in the same book. Twice.

4/6/22, 10:02 PM
@U.K. guy it logged me out for some reason, but this was me making this reply. @U.K. guy I am sure you are correct but I am using the word pants in the same manner JK Rowling did in the same book. Twice.

4/7/22, 8:21 AM
@Jack Parker I do not remember JK Rowling using pants to mean trousers, but other than the occasional "Merlin's pants!" exclaimations which definitely did mean underwear I do not remember her using the term much otherwise. Rather than use the ambiguous 'pants' or the technically recognised but practically unused on different sides of the Atlantic terms like 'trousers' or 'slacks'; JK Rowling tended to dress her characters in jeans, probably to avoid confusion or potential edits for international audiences.

4/7/22, 8:31 AM
@Envious George Page 322 and 323 of the kindle version where Peeves was threatening not to let anyone pass unless they lit their pants on fire and then Neville coming in and looking for a fresh pair of pants in his trunk. Also, I am curious if this level of editing and colloquium checks are being done with each and every porn story on here? Because I am not looking to write proper British language, I am writing porn to get people off. I used a word the actual author used twice in the same book, so I am not sure why this one use here requires three different comments. I am not British, I am not interested in writing proper British, I am interested in writing the hottest story I can. But that being said, I used the word in the same way she did in the same book.

4/7/22, 2:07 PM
Sorry I asked you to post this. I thought people might enjoy so hot porn, not decide to nitpick your American English. I’ll understand if you don’t want to continue this story but hope you’ll at least continue it for me. @Jack Parker As for the rest of you - nitpick the man’s writing when you’ve actually contributed something of substance of your own. Unbelievable.

4/8/22, 2:19 AM
Everyone can be right! :) I bought a HP book as a souvenir while on vacation in London and it’s slightly different; in that it uses the common English vernacular for things like pants, rubbish bin (trash can) etc. Loved the story, hope you continue it despite whatever all this was. Lol

4/8/22, 3:53 AM
@tmfdc You're correct. The American printings of the Harry Potter novels were "Americanized". The first book even had its title changed from "Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone" to "Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone." I've always found the dog fights over whose dialect of English is correct and the many, many internet pissing matches that have been spawned over this to be petty and trite. There's much better things to be mad about in this world.
4/8/22, 3:44 AM
The first chapter was a sexy story - the second is a sexy... werewolf story! (sort of)