Recent Comments

4/7/22, 11:45 PM
Excellent start to this story! I look forward to reading more.
Mar 13, 2021
4/7/22, 10:25 PM
This hit my buttons. Hope you can come back to it.
4/7/22, 10:14 PM
Yeah. Honestly, this one is an excellent bit of work.
4/7/22, 9:56 PM
Oh, Ev is getting all he needs, but does he want more?

4/7/22, 9:58 PM
@mjkuhl everyone always wants more.
3/4/22, 3:16 AM
I have a guess or two whose story this might be ;-) I'm not sure about the "turnaround" in this story being at all a surprise, but it certainly is a nice story. Very hot.

3/4/22, 8:21 AM
@amul My secret identity revealed?! 😜

4/7/22, 9:55 PM
@Norismo Heehee, I was right!
Anonymous
4/7/22, 5:31 PM
that was one of the hottest stories I’ve read… from the growth concept to the power play to the sex… brilliant story… I totally get that it was intended as a one off… but as noted sooo much potential for much more!!! I wonder if scrubs needs to save Barry or take over all control…

4/7/22, 9:35 PM
We are all so wired to expect an ending where the bad guy is brought to justice -- often against impossible odds -- that when it doesn't happen, there's a strange sort of disappointment. In a mind control or subjugation story, especially an erotic story, we should expect the bad guy to win.
Martin
4/7/22, 8:33 PM
May I embed those images directly into your story? They would fit really well...

4/7/22, 8:51 PM
Yes, please feel free, it was my first time trying to place images so I didn't know what was the way to get them in right 😅. Thank you @Martin

Martin
4/7/22, 9:19 PM
@ArdanWolfe Ok, I've embedded those images into your text, the positions might be a bit arbitrarily. Feel free to move them around. To embed an image yourself, use the image button in the editor's toolbar and paste the URL into the "Image URL" field. Make sure you use the URL of the actual image (usually ends with .jpg or .png), if you paste in the correct URL you should see the image in the dialog as a preview. Sometimes you get the actual URL by right clicking an image in the browser and selecting "copy image URL" or something similar. This will put the URL in the clipboard and you can paste it from there.

4/7/22, 9:33 PM
Thank you 🙂 @Martin
4/6/22, 4:04 PM
A classic absman "power at a price" story- I can think of few other authors who so deftly wed the fantasy of easy physical perfection with loss of autonomy and even personal identity, to the point that at this point, I kind of expect the guy to get mentally enslaved by the end.

4/7/22, 9:32 PM
@ParadoxBear That would help in my effort to use fewer words! On the other hand, imagine I wrote a story with lots of muscle growth and a happy ending -- people wouldn't know what to do!
4/7/22, 9:18 PM
Nice to read some hot foot action! Simple but a very relatable setup that we wished we could all have such a roommate at our disposal! ;)
Anonymous
4/7/22, 7:14 PM
Wow, loved it. would love to read the rest of it. I wonder if Casey will end up going and ending up tattooed and pierced himself.