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4/7/22, 9:18 PM
Nice to read some hot foot action! Simple but a very relatable setup that we wished we could all have such a roommate at our disposal! ;)
Anonymous
4/7/22, 7:14 PM
Wow, loved it. would love to read the rest of it. I wonder if Casey will end up going and ending up tattooed and pierced himself.
4/7/22, 6:55 PM
Can't wait to see what Casey and Brother David get up to
4/6/22, 3:52 PM
The concept is fun and original, and the twist that these men can never find companionship within their fraternity adds a poignancy that deepens the story beyond what could have been an enjoyable but straightforward fantasy about scent play, mind control, and masculinization. I like that you didn't give Tony an easy answer to his problems.

4/7/22, 5:31 PM
@ParadoxBear Thank you for the very thoughtful comment. Life has no easy answers. Struggle is the only thing we all share.
4/7/22, 4:23 PM
I found this one a big of a slog compared to the others, but a slog in the context of a series with high standards (and I haven't even got to your current ones yet. _Jesus Christ!_) Also, I came so explosively while reading, that I think almost slipped a disc. So, that'll be 5/5 for 'wanking material' then... ...five dicks out of five, and a trip to the doctors.
Apr 4, 2022
StonedGainer
4/7/22, 3:49 PM
Good to see ya back and making quality smut!
4/7/22, 3:44 PM
Yeah., just passing into the next chapter, the dynamic was spicier here. There's character, but it's not shoved too far forward for the sex stuff. Interesting read.
Anonymous
4/7/22, 3:37 PM
Was there ever a continuation of this?!? such a promising start…
4/7/22, 3:26 PM
Great stuff. I like the repetition of dialogue. It becomes a great pacing mechanism for the story. The reader reading experiences Henry's influence recounted in stages, and the whole story feels like one long and coherent pre-sex scene. An exquisite example of 'Hot'ness specifically.
4/6/22, 11:22 PM
I suppose I can comment now that the contest is over! Thanks for the compliments! This was fun to write.

Martin
4/7/22, 4:40 AM
@bluesuedewho You can always comment, even if the contest is still running. The website will hide your name in comments :) And congratulations!

4/7/22, 3:23 PM
@Martin Thanks! I'm glad so many readers enjoyed it!