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4/5/22, 4:07 PM
Workdbuilding makes me *hot*, and this delivers in spades. Plus the actual hotness, which: hot. Can’t wait to read more!
4/5/22, 4:00 PM
babe wake up new mstgay3000 story just dropped
Whiteypa
4/5/22, 2:44 PM
Awesome! Love when cops, especially in uniform, have their power removed and are humiliated!
Apr 4, 2022
4/5/22, 12:11 PM
This story is pure detailed horror and nonconsent and sex and I can’t make it a fifth of the way before cumming. You know how to give the gift that keeps on giving!
4/5/22, 12:00 PM
Having read both versions of this story, I think my favourite image is the idea of Evan's mind/will leaking out through his pre-cum and his complete trust in the situation. The first-person perspective also helped because I had no information except what Ethan gave to me filtered through his perception, which helped me feel that trust.
4/5/22, 8:02 AM
Oooh, this is fun! It's full of great details: I love that DubCon is back (they're clearly a megacorp), and I also like that you reflect typically-unseen forms of sexuality in your story (William being bi-curious but defaulting to straight, and Ricky having unrecognized flags on his backpack presumably referring to other queer communities). The nature of the tale, too, allows for all kinds of interesting forms of fetishes to appear. As usual, you do a great job with dialogue (Ricky's sarcastic jibes made me laugh) and painting the characters. And finally, it's a neat little commentary about the hypnotic nature of our cell phones, and how they're always on--our brains "reprogrammed" to get those dopamine hits. All in all, a fantastic story! :)

4/5/22, 11:20 AM
@Feed Your Head not to toot my own horn, but i do enjoy finding the social commentary and thought exploration in my otherwise erotic fiction. Glad you caught on that its not just being hypnosis and that dopamine being a powerful influence. I like the idea that Dubcon invests in a variety of mind-altering & control methods. So far we've had chemical and technological. Wonder what else.
4/5/22, 9:04 AM
I like so many elements of this. I agree it’s a bit fast and I would have loved to see more struggle from Victor. But it’s your story and it’s great so continue!

4/5/22, 9:59 AM
@Mrdick Thank you! Don't worry, the story will slow down a bit, I just wanted to do the initiation quickly, so we can do more horny stuff later!
4/5/22, 7:00 AM
I assume you aren't going to come back to this story? I hope that you can. I find it very intriguing; I've only read one other magic plant story, that plot device captures my imagination. Good job writing what you have posted.
3/6/22, 3:25 AM
This was an amazing (non)addition to a series that doesn't rhyme with "Bimbo Gaze". While I have received no further information as to the deep lore about what is going on in this gated community haven for himbos, I am not even slightly upset! Elliot's (standalone) story about finding his Daddy while his mind is in a haze is very quick, but I LOVE IT. Not a lot of answers are given, but they are also not needed because Elliot is not a Daddy who needs to operate with a ton of answers in order to provide for someone. This submission to the contest is wonderful and i enjoyed it so much, I would have loved a longer, slower burn to this ride but I totally understand why that's not the best way to do that here, and why it doesn't work for a contest entry. Still, revisiting Elliot's POV to find out how he gains a college education WHILE settling into a Himbo's status would be SUPER COOL to see. ... Not that I know who wrote this, OR anything underlying about the story. (SHHH!)

3/6/22, 7:55 AM
@Mind Labyrinth I hadn't even considered a story with him in college! Ooh. 😀

3/6/22, 8:15 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) My Favorite moment was when Elliot hit Mr. Masters with his Full himbo eyes and Masters has to ride his own Daddy Daze for a second, or at least that's what it seemed like to me. If... there were such a thing as a daddy daze. because of course this is a stand alone story. right.

3/6/22, 8:31 AM
@Mind Labyrinth Elliot could have his first fleeting encounter with a little bro, who would totally be a brand new character, and not someone the reader would know beforehand, because this is a standalone story. 😉

4/4/22, 2:10 PM
@Norismo Le GASPETH! Norismo????? IS IT TRUE?!!?!??! I AM SO SHOCKED. SHOCKED I SAY To learn that this story was written by you! It makes so much sense now!

4/5/22, 6:57 AM
@Mind Labyrinth It's true, my dastardly deception has been revealed
4/5/22, 5:31 AM
This moves way too fast!

4/5/22, 6:40 AM
@ifitz don't worry, I have a lot of plans for Victor and Dan!