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4/5/22, 9:04 AM
I like so many elements of this. I agree it’s a bit fast and I would have loved to see more struggle from Victor. But it’s your story and it’s great so continue!

4/5/22, 9:59 AM
@Mrdick Thank you! Don't worry, the story will slow down a bit, I just wanted to do the initiation quickly, so we can do more horny stuff later!
4/5/22, 7:00 AM
I assume you aren't going to come back to this story? I hope that you can. I find it very intriguing; I've only read one other magic plant story, that plot device captures my imagination. Good job writing what you have posted.
3/6/22, 3:25 AM
This was an amazing (non)addition to a series that doesn't rhyme with "Bimbo Gaze". While I have received no further information as to the deep lore about what is going on in this gated community haven for himbos, I am not even slightly upset! Elliot's (standalone) story about finding his Daddy while his mind is in a haze is very quick, but I LOVE IT. Not a lot of answers are given, but they are also not needed because Elliot is not a Daddy who needs to operate with a ton of answers in order to provide for someone. This submission to the contest is wonderful and i enjoyed it so much, I would have loved a longer, slower burn to this ride but I totally understand why that's not the best way to do that here, and why it doesn't work for a contest entry. Still, revisiting Elliot's POV to find out how he gains a college education WHILE settling into a Himbo's status would be SUPER COOL to see. ... Not that I know who wrote this, OR anything underlying about the story. (SHHH!)

3/6/22, 7:55 AM
@Mind Labyrinth I hadn't even considered a story with him in college! Ooh. 😀

3/6/22, 8:15 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) My Favorite moment was when Elliot hit Mr. Masters with his Full himbo eyes and Masters has to ride his own Daddy Daze for a second, or at least that's what it seemed like to me. If... there were such a thing as a daddy daze. because of course this is a stand alone story. right.

3/6/22, 8:31 AM
@Mind Labyrinth Elliot could have his first fleeting encounter with a little bro, who would totally be a brand new character, and not someone the reader would know beforehand, because this is a standalone story. 😉

4/4/22, 2:10 PM
@Norismo Le GASPETH! Norismo????? IS IT TRUE?!!?!??! I AM SO SHOCKED. SHOCKED I SAY To learn that this story was written by you! It makes so much sense now!

4/5/22, 6:57 AM
@Mind Labyrinth It's true, my dastardly deception has been revealed
4/5/22, 5:31 AM
This moves way too fast!

4/5/22, 6:40 AM
@ifitz don't worry, I have a lot of plans for Victor and Dan!
4/5/22, 4:46 AM
:100:
David
4/5/22, 3:21 AM
OMG!!!! I'm under your spell, is there more?
Evan
4/5/22, 2:12 AM
Another great series and chapter. After the trust and affection of last chapter, they get some payoff for themselves and continue to expose and fill Ev's needs. Looks like those daddy issues are coming to the surface.
4/4/22, 10:53 PM
I agree with Evelded. Excruciatingly hot. Being caught naked (and hard!) in public is one of my deepest fantasies. You are fast becoming one of my favorite authors.

4/4/22, 11:18 PM
@Beaner mine too! I used to go out late at night to find places in my city to strip off and walk around naked and hard, seeing how far I dared to travel away from my clothes.

4/5/22, 2:02 AM
@GoonNoob. Gaaaaaa! Okay. You just became my favorite author. Now I have to go clean up.

4/5/22, 2:05 AM
@Beaner sleep in it pig XD
4/5/22, 1:47 AM
A fun concept for a new series! Curious if we'll be seeing thongs again in this one

4/5/22, 2:04 AM
@Botbot You know me too well ;) While it won't be as thong focused as the other series, this one definitely has thongs and jockstraps involved.
4/5/22, 12:20 AM
Cant wait for the next installment. Please give some emphasis on the facial hair development. Very hot so far!!!