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4/4/22, 11:59 AM
Omg you are such a genius at writing!!! I totally want to try putting tomato paste on guys stinky toes so I can lick them off. Also that humiliation scene with Viktor uncontrollably cumming infront of his big bro, who he was secretly having a wet dream about, was beyond hot. My cock basically made the cartoon boing! sound. Great, great, great job. You should be really proud of your work.

4/4/22, 2:07 PM
@James Heller Haha, I'm glad you enjoy the story!
4/4/22, 12:38 PM
I'm liking what I'm reading so far, especially because soft, kind doms are my thing, and incest is also kinda my thing. However, I have a few suggestions you're free to consider or not: - Break their speech lines by paragraph, having two people speak in the same paragraph is confusing. - Don't italicise their speech, it's usually done for thoughts instead of spoken words. - Unless you're sticking with this fast publishing spree, try making longer chapters, you'll end up being too much of a tease. Otherwise, keep up the great work :3

4/4/22, 2:06 PM
@Twan Andersen Thank you for the feedback! I'll definetly try to improve of the formatting part. As for the chapters I think they will be about this length, but they will be more packed with 'the good stuff' in the future!
4/4/22, 12:03 PM
Be interesting to see how much of a lad he becomes, maybe he will be encouraged to hang out with some of the scallies Jack arrests… slowly becoming more like them, get him self arrested and tagged…
4/4/22, 10:34 AM
I loved this!! Thank you for writing it!
4/4/22, 7:02 AM
I will be looking out for more chapters of this for certain

4/4/22, 9:07 AM
@MalSkin Thank you! The second chapter should be published later today!
4/4/22, 8:01 AM
Your story is so HOT!

4/4/22, 8:12 AM
@blueron Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback
4/4/22, 8:00 AM
_Furiously takes notes on how Naga stories should be written._ This is such a fun series, I'd love to see more overt naga-eye hypnosis, but I love the audio style of the hissing too.
4/4/22, 5:30 AM
Oh my god, so hot. But also really sweet. Thank you for writing this!

4/4/22, 5:36 AM
@James Heller Thank you very much! It really means a lot to me. Feel free to leave any suggestions for the story you have in mind! Who knows, maybe your idea will make it into one of the future parts!

4/4/22, 5:45 AM
@BoredSoap Anything stinky feet I'll love. Feet are life and the source of all happiness!!! Haha they smell great, they taste great and rubbing them just makes me happy

4/4/22, 5:53 AM
@James Heller Hah, you will love the future chapters then! I highly encourage you too check out the anonymous form I made. You can find a link under the story! And a bit of a lore for you: Dan's feet stink so much, he has his own shoe cabinet, which is sealed so it won't stink up the house. And there's plenty to lick! In addition to being very long, they are wide as well! He takes good care of them, so the soles are tender and the skin is soft!

4/4/22, 5:56 AM
@BoredSoap Fuck if my older brother had size 16 feet and a sealed shoe cabinet of stinky shoes I would be in heaven! Wide feet are the hottest of all feet. God I wish Dan was my big brother. He sounds like the perfect brother!!! I'll check out the form :)

4/4/22, 6:00 AM
@James Heller I bet he would love you! And he would be so happy to have a brother who loves his feet without needing to be hypnotized!

4/4/22, 6:06 AM
@BoredSoap Thank you so much for your feedback. If you want, you can see the form once again, I added a question I think you might be interested in, hah

4/4/22, 7:10 AM
@BoredSoap Was definitely interested and submitted it again. Thank you for your lovely addition
Mar 25, 2022
Anubis
4/4/22, 6:42 AM
You need to continue this series! It's so good and hot! Can't wait to see Piers enter the story or especially the two hot neighbors mentioned in the beginning. It'd be great to see them fuck Chris! I would also love if you added some rimming involved too!
4/4/22, 6:25 AM
Amazingly hot start! Can't wait to see where this goes! Love the idea of being transformed into a scally lad, especially one in shiny trackies and puffer jackets! Would love to see him end up with a nice tight cropped haircut, a buzzed oval on top and down to skin on the sides