Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/4/22, 2:39 AM
The story is hot. Really hot. Moved a little fast, but that's okay. You'll learn. Advice: run the spell and grammar check after you've finished writing. Writing is not the hard part. Believe it or not: it's the editing. Editing takes time. You'll know the difference when you read the better writers on this blog. If you're using MSWord, it's real simple. Keep writing. And write what makes you enjoy the creative side of you.
4/4/22, 2:21 AM
I like where this story is going. Thank you for writing it.
Martin
4/3/22, 8:36 PM
Best and most realistic hypno story ever! I see myself in Roman, at least partly. I never had problems bottoming, and I strife to be able to relent control... and I'm not nearly as dominant as him. But other than that...

4/4/22, 12:42 AM
@Martin I'm glad you could see something of yourself in Roman! I wanted him to be a relatable guy who also happened to have some hangups about the things he wants deep down! It's awesome to hear how much you enjoyed the story, too. Thanks for this kind comment.
4/3/22, 4:13 PM
This did a grand thing—I wasn’t squeamish at all during the hypnosis scene; it felt really cool and sweet, not dangerous. It found it hot from beginning to end, and Roman’s descent was very wholesome and fun. Thanks for this entry!

4/4/22, 12:16 AM
@Soren Fitz I'm so glad. It was exactly my intent to make something that played against CNC hypnosis tropes but still managed to get at the hot stuff! Thank you so much.
4/4/22, 12:02 AM
Reading a new Jack Parker chapter or story is the new definition of MustSeeTV!
4/3/22, 5:25 AM
What a trip. 5’s across the board.

4/4/22, 12:01 AM
@Beaner Thank you so much for taking the time to rate and comment! It's hugely encouraging. Hope to share more soon!
4/2/22, 5:23 PM
Interesting. loved it. can't wait for more.

4/4/22, 12:00 AM
@Jonanator Thank you so much for the encouragement! Can't wait to share more with you!
David
4/3/22, 9:40 PM
Wow! More please.
4/3/22, 8:30 PM
Hot start, looking forward to reading the rest!
3/31/22, 6:22 PM
So hot. How do we contact for a possible story commission?

3/31/22, 11:24 PM
@Sinatraguy74 thank you! You can private message me on here regarding any commission requests :)

4/3/22, 8:24 PM
@FKH19 sadly I have no cash but year your stuff is great but forced family bonding is continuing to i hope