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4/3/22, 1:31 PM
The sheer amount of joy to know that this updated while I was not paying attention because my spam folder settings ate my notification email... I was fucking THRILLED. Well, WELL worth the wait. Thank you for gracing us with another installment! As I tell all the writers of my most favorite stories, PLEASE do not rush! I am honored and pleased to wait patiently for when you next grace us with another chapter, and do not wish for haste to threaten the quality given thus far. I cherish each chapter you've given us, and will give us, and will create joy in waiting, knowing that you will write more for this story, only because you've been inspired to continue it to the same wonderful quality and standard as we've been gifted thus far. :relieved:
4/3/22, 12:59 PM
You could take a bit more time to tell the story, but it‘s hot, and I like it. Stories about jocks and bros are the best. <3
Evan
4/3/22, 2:56 AM
> It’s interesting that people gravitated towards the sweet stuff rather than the more heavy bdsm side of things. You’d think it would be the other way round. Maybe I created my Thieves too lovable lol. Valuable data, as Dubcon would say. To add to your data, Brock was loveable. He seemed like he's been dragged into bad experiences by Jason in the past. Not saying Jason deserved his fate but Brock did deserve a reduced sentence. And his love of Mike being uncommon when affected by the drug is really sweet. As for the heavy BDSM vs sweet stuff, I like some good BDSM. And Zeus/Hiro included some of that. The difficulty I had with the BDSM was that Adams was abusive, not just BDSM. If Brock and Jason had been subjected to the teasing ridicule, cock, and whatever else but in a more "consensual" (as much as one can with DubCon Corp involved) environment I'd have enjoyed it a lot more, I think. I'm sure there were many readers for whom that was a huge turn on who didn't comment though. So do whatever works for the story. I just wanted to include that BDSM and sweetness aren't always mutually exclusive. Like, Zeus' taking advantage of them was hot. But his ultimate goal was to benefit them both not only abuse his power over them. I won't argue ethics and not saying this is right either but it is easier to accept for me that the "Sir" in the BDSM or power exchange has some level of interest in the wellbeing of the sub/s. I love that Brock and Mike got a happy ending. So happy about that. He's essentially reliant on DubCon for his fix but a small price to pay to be able to give Mike a real boyfriend. And what a fun dynamic that Mike can make his boyfriend a horny mindless mess as well.

4/3/22, 12:30 PM
@Evan appreciate the feedback and your insight. Re-reading chapter 6 I still like it but understand how it sticks out from the vibe of the rest of the story. I even went back to remove some of the more bigoted stuff cause while it fits the character, it's a real boner killer. I honestly love Mike & Brock's relationship as they get the best of both worlds. Maybe one day Jason will break out of his endless amnesia loop too, who knows?
4/1/22, 9:51 AM
Hooray! I’ve been waiting for a new chapter of this, and it did not disappoint. :D Everything about this story is achingly hot. I particularly love the descriptions of Luke and Sammy being close enough to kiss, and wondering about each other…I hope Sammy confesses his true feelings soon. And finally, I want to commend you on making Luke a perfect himbo! He has that perfect mix of cluelessness and sweetness that makes him great to read (at times I wonder how he can possibly miss what’s happening with Sammy, but you do a great job making his obliviousness justified by the text). Fantastic!

SC Walker
4/1/22, 2:34 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you! One of my goals with this story is to make Luke’s dumbness plausible - sometimes I feel like dumb jock stories are too far fetched. When I figured out that he was on the spectrum everything just clicked. I’m also glad you like Sammy and Luke’s burgeoning feelings - I was nervous about including the romance elements but people luckily seem to like it.

4/2/22, 9:25 AM
@SC Walker Hmmm…this is interesting. By “spectrum” I am guessing you mean the autism spectrum? I must admit that raises some questions for me. On the one hand, Sammy and the other guys’ actions feel a LOT creepier if Luke is literally unable to process what’s going on around him: being clueless is one thing, but someone whose brain *can’t* analyze information and cues is another. Obviously this site is infamous for questionable consent, but a story where characters have diagnosable mental health conditions…well, it pushes it into a much more complicated area. At the same time, though, being on the autism spectrum doesn’t inherently mean that someone doesn’t experience sexual attraction; to write such characters as asexual or “too childish” to have a sex drive can be infantilizing. There’s a good deal to think about here…

SC Walker
4/2/22, 12:02 PM
@Feed Your Head I understand your concern but I am particularly suited to writing a story about a character on the spectrum. Yes, the teammates are borderline sexually harassing him, but the important thing to understand is that Luke ALWAYS consents to sex. I make sure to stress that part. Luke is oblivious to his own feelings; he doesn’t realize (yet) that he WANTS to get felt up and fucked. I appreciate your concern, though, and I sm going to keep it in mind when writing future chapters.

Anonymous
4/2/22, 10:00 PM
@SC Walker i wanted to throw in my two cents as an autistic person and say that although it's definitely a tricky thing to write, luke as a character is absolutely clicking for me. i was actually kind of delighted to scroll down here and see that he was on the spectrum. the relationship between him and sam is also absolutely wonderful, and i'm really excited to see how it progresses!

SC Walker
4/2/22, 11:59 PM
Thank you, that means a lot to me! I'm glad Luke is resonating.

4/3/22, 12:10 PM
@SC Walker Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to me, and for being so frank about your writing background and experience. I hope I am not coming across as too prudish or pedantic. It is rare for a work to give people the opportunity to think about consent and discuss it, and your story is doing just that. I’m particularly intrigued by the idea of wanting something without realizing you want it…Thank you for the opportunity to share my thoughts. :)
Evan
4/3/22, 11:11 AM
Damn. What an ending to this chapter! So hot, electric. Great turn around, consequences, and fun. And a little bit of shame to go with it.
4/3/22, 11:03 AM
I hope to see next part soon
Evan
4/3/22, 10:05 AM
This is my favourite chapter. It has elements of their new dynamic but also really sweet and a bit romantic.
3/28/22, 10:15 AM
Excellent writing as ever. It would be interesting to see if the Daddy's practice began to deal more with sexual issues and the boy became a tool for patients desires/treatment...

3/30/22, 6:03 PM
@DriftingScot Hey nice idea. Group therapy tool for middle aged men whose marriages are on the rocks, perhaps?

4/3/22, 6:51 AM
@Whitechap_e1....ohhh that's an idea...a group of controlled men submitting to daddy..lots of fetish possibilities there...please write it!
4/3/22, 5:47 AM
Good possibilities. Keep it going. How about the boss taking over his life with physical and personality changes, while he victim just watches, unbelieving but ambiguously eager and horrified. Maybe create a second alternate personality. "Holy shit! Is that me in the mirror? When and how did I get a cigarette jones? And that ink. Um, I mean tattoos. I look like a biker or an ex-con. I wonder if I could get into a fist fight in a bar? Wait, Why the hell would I WANT to get into a fight in a bar? Well, maybe if I could win the fight. . . I sure look like a mean mother fucker, and I bet I could take out a couple of dudes in a fight."
4/2/22, 11:57 PM
I really like the back-and-forth switching between Dad, Doctor, and Master. Hoping you continue this story and keep that up.