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John
4/4/22, 4:07 PM
This hit every fetish button with me.
4/4/22, 3:16 PM
> Coldwater scowled. “Tell me, Salazar, did your asshole just twitch?” Bwaaaahahaha, worth reading for this line alone.
Apr 3, 2022
4/4/22, 10:14 AM
Excellent story. Really love the artwork your incorporated into it too. Did the drawings come first or the writing?

4/4/22, 1:17 PM
@GoonNoob Hey, thanks for reading! It started as a drawing, specifically the sequence with the vines. At first I was just going to caption the images or something, but then it turned into a whole written thing.

4/4/22, 2:18 PM
@Oakfells glad you did. Wish I could do drawings like that for my stories. Keep up the good work!
4/4/22, 11:59 AM
Omg you are such a genius at writing!!! I totally want to try putting tomato paste on guys stinky toes so I can lick them off. Also that humiliation scene with Viktor uncontrollably cumming infront of his big bro, who he was secretly having a wet dream about, was beyond hot. My cock basically made the cartoon boing! sound. Great, great, great job. You should be really proud of your work.

4/4/22, 2:07 PM
@James Heller Haha, I'm glad you enjoy the story!
4/4/22, 12:38 PM
I'm liking what I'm reading so far, especially because soft, kind doms are my thing, and incest is also kinda my thing. However, I have a few suggestions you're free to consider or not: - Break their speech lines by paragraph, having two people speak in the same paragraph is confusing. - Don't italicise their speech, it's usually done for thoughts instead of spoken words. - Unless you're sticking with this fast publishing spree, try making longer chapters, you'll end up being too much of a tease. Otherwise, keep up the great work :3

4/4/22, 2:06 PM
@Twan Andersen Thank you for the feedback! I'll definetly try to improve of the formatting part. As for the chapters I think they will be about this length, but they will be more packed with 'the good stuff' in the future!
4/4/22, 12:03 PM
Be interesting to see how much of a lad he becomes, maybe he will be encouraged to hang out with some of the scallies Jack arrests… slowly becoming more like them, get him self arrested and tagged…
4/4/22, 10:34 AM
I loved this!! Thank you for writing it!
4/4/22, 7:02 AM
I will be looking out for more chapters of this for certain

4/4/22, 9:07 AM
@MalSkin Thank you! The second chapter should be published later today!
4/4/22, 8:01 AM
Your story is so HOT!

4/4/22, 8:12 AM
@blueron Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback
4/4/22, 8:00 AM
_Furiously takes notes on how Naga stories should be written._ This is such a fun series, I'd love to see more overt naga-eye hypnosis, but I love the audio style of the hissing too.