Recent Comments

4/1/22, 9:51 AM
Hooray! I’ve been waiting for a new chapter of this, and it did not disappoint. :D Everything about this story is achingly hot. I particularly love the descriptions of Luke and Sammy being close enough to kiss, and wondering about each other…I hope Sammy confesses his true feelings soon. And finally, I want to commend you on making Luke a perfect himbo! He has that perfect mix of cluelessness and sweetness that makes him great to read (at times I wonder how he can possibly miss what’s happening with Sammy, but you do a great job making his obliviousness justified by the text). Fantastic!

SC Walker
4/1/22, 2:34 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you! One of my goals with this story is to make Luke’s dumbness plausible - sometimes I feel like dumb jock stories are too far fetched. When I figured out that he was on the spectrum everything just clicked. I’m also glad you like Sammy and Luke’s burgeoning feelings - I was nervous about including the romance elements but people luckily seem to like it.

4/2/22, 9:25 AM
@SC Walker Hmmm…this is interesting. By “spectrum” I am guessing you mean the autism spectrum? I must admit that raises some questions for me. On the one hand, Sammy and the other guys’ actions feel a LOT creepier if Luke is literally unable to process what’s going on around him: being clueless is one thing, but someone whose brain *can’t* analyze information and cues is another. Obviously this site is infamous for questionable consent, but a story where characters have diagnosable mental health conditions…well, it pushes it into a much more complicated area. At the same time, though, being on the autism spectrum doesn’t inherently mean that someone doesn’t experience sexual attraction; to write such characters as asexual or “too childish” to have a sex drive can be infantilizing. There’s a good deal to think about here…

SC Walker
4/2/22, 12:02 PM
@Feed Your Head I understand your concern but I am particularly suited to writing a story about a character on the spectrum. Yes, the teammates are borderline sexually harassing him, but the important thing to understand is that Luke ALWAYS consents to sex. I make sure to stress that part. Luke is oblivious to his own feelings; he doesn’t realize (yet) that he WANTS to get felt up and fucked. I appreciate your concern, though, and I sm going to keep it in mind when writing future chapters.

Anonymous
4/2/22, 10:00 PM
@SC Walker i wanted to throw in my two cents as an autistic person and say that although it's definitely a tricky thing to write, luke as a character is absolutely clicking for me. i was actually kind of delighted to scroll down here and see that he was on the spectrum. the relationship between him and sam is also absolutely wonderful, and i'm really excited to see how it progresses!

SC Walker
4/2/22, 11:59 PM
Thank you, that means a lot to me! I'm glad Luke is resonating.

4/3/22, 12:10 PM
@SC Walker Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to me, and for being so frank about your writing background and experience. I hope I am not coming across as too prudish or pedantic. It is rare for a work to give people the opportunity to think about consent and discuss it, and your story is doing just that. I’m particularly intrigued by the idea of wanting something without realizing you want it…Thank you for the opportunity to share my thoughts. :)
Evan
4/3/22, 11:11 AM
Damn. What an ending to this chapter! So hot, electric. Great turn around, consequences, and fun. And a little bit of shame to go with it.
4/3/22, 11:03 AM
I hope to see next part soon
Evan
4/3/22, 10:05 AM
This is my favourite chapter. It has elements of their new dynamic but also really sweet and a bit romantic.
3/28/22, 10:15 AM
Excellent writing as ever. It would be interesting to see if the Daddy's practice began to deal more with sexual issues and the boy became a tool for patients desires/treatment...

3/30/22, 6:03 PM
@DriftingScot Hey nice idea. Group therapy tool for middle aged men whose marriages are on the rocks, perhaps?

4/3/22, 6:51 AM
@Whitechap_e1....ohhh that's an idea...a group of controlled men submitting to daddy..lots of fetish possibilities there...please write it!
4/3/22, 5:47 AM
Good possibilities. Keep it going. How about the boss taking over his life with physical and personality changes, while he victim just watches, unbelieving but ambiguously eager and horrified. Maybe create a second alternate personality. "Holy shit! Is that me in the mirror? When and how did I get a cigarette jones? And that ink. Um, I mean tattoos. I look like a biker or an ex-con. I wonder if I could get into a fist fight in a bar? Wait, Why the hell would I WANT to get into a fight in a bar? Well, maybe if I could win the fight. . . I sure look like a mean mother fucker, and I bet I could take out a couple of dudes in a fight."
4/2/22, 11:57 PM
I really like the back-and-forth switching between Dad, Doctor, and Master. Hoping you continue this story and keep that up.
Apr 2, 2022
4/2/22, 9:06 PM
I feel like in reality emancipation is a thing, child abuse is a thing that can and should be reported. A teen as rebellious as Ben wouldn't just take the punishment and his parents would get in serious trouble for doing this. Overall the story just didn't make sense. I think this could be definitely improved by a second chapter where Ben tries to break the rules and get free.

4/2/22, 11:23 PM
@Hypnofiend23 Hey, thanks for your honest feedback. I mean I get what you mean but does the story have to make sense. It’s a fantasy after all. But yeah, I actually did already plan something like Ben fighting back as a possible second chapter. Maybe… thanks for your comment tho, it really helps. Stay kinky
Aardvark
4/2/22, 9:10 PM
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4/2/22, 10:47 PM
You stay classy, @Aardvark! (But seriously, thanks, brother! Love ya!)
4/2/22, 10:37 PM
Would love a bit of a focus on shoes in the upcoming chapters. Lots of potential. ;) Love TNs on a chav!