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AppleLovingDaddy
4/3/22, 7:18 PM
Sexy as hell x) This was a really nice and kinky chapter. It's hot to see them converting hungry guys and making them theirs, especially with the musk. Really hot, please keep up the great work ^^

4/3/22, 7:23 PM
@AppleLovingDaddy Thanks! This story is complete, for now at least. But don't worry, I'm wrking on another story!
AppleLovingDaddy
4/3/22, 7:08 PM
Damn, this is nice. It's hot to see the changes so drastically, and the passion for each other getting stronger :yum: Maybe you could add some pit and ass worship to the musk? Really bonding over their shared funky odors

4/3/22, 7:11 PM
@AppleLovingDaddy I will definetly think about that! Thank you for your feedback
AppleLovingDaddy
4/3/22, 6:50 PM
:eyes: Whew, love to see this relationship growing between them, the detail you add to every scene's very nice to read. ^^

4/3/22, 6:52 PM
@AppleLovingDaddy Thank you daddy!
AppleLovingDaddy
4/3/22, 6:43 PM
Very sexy start :smile: Looking forward to more of your work ^^

4/3/22, 6:50 PM
@AppleLovingDaddy Thank you! It means a lot to me
4/3/22, 5:02 PM
Love the set up to this story. You did really well with your first shot at this, and I think with more practice you could write something great. I wanted to like this story but there was little focus on the transformations and I had a hard time imagining it. I love when a story sucks you in and lets you believe you are part of it. I think you have the potential to do just that.
Anonymous
3/31/22, 1:31 PM
A story about dad and son's relationship is hot, especially when dad is regressed into his son's young boyfriend. I like to read these kinds of story too much!!! So, I look forward to your next story.

4/3/22, 4:51 PM
Thank you so much for the feedback. I have a few stories here.
4/3/22, 3:38 PM
…what Aardvark said 🔥🔥🔥

4/3/22, 3:48 PM
Heh! Nice, @SwimJock! Always happy to “inspire” one of my readers…
4/3/22, 1:31 PM
The sheer amount of joy to know that this updated while I was not paying attention because my spam folder settings ate my notification email... I was fucking THRILLED. Well, WELL worth the wait. Thank you for gracing us with another installment! As I tell all the writers of my most favorite stories, PLEASE do not rush! I am honored and pleased to wait patiently for when you next grace us with another chapter, and do not wish for haste to threaten the quality given thus far. I cherish each chapter you've given us, and will give us, and will create joy in waiting, knowing that you will write more for this story, only because you've been inspired to continue it to the same wonderful quality and standard as we've been gifted thus far. :relieved:
4/3/22, 12:59 PM
You could take a bit more time to tell the story, but it‘s hot, and I like it. Stories about jocks and bros are the best. <3
Evan
4/3/22, 2:56 AM
> It’s interesting that people gravitated towards the sweet stuff rather than the more heavy bdsm side of things. You’d think it would be the other way round. Maybe I created my Thieves too lovable lol. Valuable data, as Dubcon would say. To add to your data, Brock was loveable. He seemed like he's been dragged into bad experiences by Jason in the past. Not saying Jason deserved his fate but Brock did deserve a reduced sentence. And his love of Mike being uncommon when affected by the drug is really sweet. As for the heavy BDSM vs sweet stuff, I like some good BDSM. And Zeus/Hiro included some of that. The difficulty I had with the BDSM was that Adams was abusive, not just BDSM. If Brock and Jason had been subjected to the teasing ridicule, cock, and whatever else but in a more "consensual" (as much as one can with DubCon Corp involved) environment I'd have enjoyed it a lot more, I think. I'm sure there were many readers for whom that was a huge turn on who didn't comment though. So do whatever works for the story. I just wanted to include that BDSM and sweetness aren't always mutually exclusive. Like, Zeus' taking advantage of them was hot. But his ultimate goal was to benefit them both not only abuse his power over them. I won't argue ethics and not saying this is right either but it is easier to accept for me that the "Sir" in the BDSM or power exchange has some level of interest in the wellbeing of the sub/s. I love that Brock and Mike got a happy ending. So happy about that. He's essentially reliant on DubCon for his fix but a small price to pay to be able to give Mike a real boyfriend. And what a fun dynamic that Mike can make his boyfriend a horny mindless mess as well.

4/3/22, 12:30 PM
@Evan appreciate the feedback and your insight. Re-reading chapter 6 I still like it but understand how it sticks out from the vibe of the rest of the story. I even went back to remove some of the more bigoted stuff cause while it fits the character, it's a real boner killer. I honestly love Mike & Brock's relationship as they get the best of both worlds. Maybe one day Jason will break out of his endless amnesia loop too, who knows?