Recent Comments

4/3/22, 5:47 AM
Good possibilities. Keep it going. How about the boss taking over his life with physical and personality changes, while he victim just watches, unbelieving but ambiguously eager and horrified. Maybe create a second alternate personality. "Holy shit! Is that me in the mirror? When and how did I get a cigarette jones? And that ink. Um, I mean tattoos. I look like a biker or an ex-con. I wonder if I could get into a fist fight in a bar? Wait, Why the hell would I WANT to get into a fight in a bar? Well, maybe if I could win the fight. . . I sure look like a mean mother fucker, and I bet I could take out a couple of dudes in a fight."
4/2/22, 11:57 PM
I really like the back-and-forth switching between Dad, Doctor, and Master. Hoping you continue this story and keep that up.
Apr 2, 2022
4/2/22, 9:06 PM
I feel like in reality emancipation is a thing, child abuse is a thing that can and should be reported. A teen as rebellious as Ben wouldn't just take the punishment and his parents would get in serious trouble for doing this. Overall the story just didn't make sense. I think this could be definitely improved by a second chapter where Ben tries to break the rules and get free.

4/2/22, 11:23 PM
@Hypnofiend23 Hey, thanks for your honest feedback. I mean I get what you mean but does the story have to make sense. It’s a fantasy after all. But yeah, I actually did already plan something like Ben fighting back as a possible second chapter. Maybe… thanks for your comment tho, it really helps. Stay kinky
Aardvark
4/2/22, 9:10 PM
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4/2/22, 10:47 PM
You stay classy, @Aardvark! (But seriously, thanks, brother! Love ya!)
4/2/22, 10:37 PM
Would love a bit of a focus on shoes in the upcoming chapters. Lots of potential. ;) Love TNs on a chav!
4/2/22, 10:29 PM
I love when a jock gets turned into a little slut. Great story.
4/2/22, 9:44 PM
That was awesome! Can't wait to see Jameson's reaction when he wakes up.
4/2/22, 8:06 PM
I think it's a great setup. Lots of ways this could go.
Anonymous
4/2/22, 5:26 PM
Damn good as always

4/2/22, 7:47 PM
Thanks! Glad u liked it.
4/2/22, 7:41 PM
Truly exactly the kind of story I love to read! Thank you for sharing it with us.