Recent Comments

Rob
4/2/22, 12:08 PM
Wow that was super hot. Really looking forward to reading the rest.
4/2/22, 12:05 PM
Nice Plot. Looking forward to see the transformation into a tatted and Pierced Chav with a extreme haircut. Keep on going.
4/2/22, 9:59 AM
Really well written, could easily be a story from Weird Tales or something. Great job!
4/2/22, 6:58 AM
Very hot. thank you for sharing your story. Look forward to the chapter!
3/30/22, 2:50 PM
This is such a fun world! You’ve really fleshed out the characters, and now they have motivations, plans of action, ideas… they feel real, and this world feels full of possibility. I’m excited to see more.

4/2/22, 5:06 AM
@Soren Fitz Thank you! I have some fun angles to this world I have yet to reveal as well!
Anonymous
4/1/22, 7:13 PM
Don't particularly care about the preachy crypto bullshit but I'm glad this story is being continued

4/2/22, 5:05 AM
Oh, well, thanks for letting me know you felt the crypto explanation came across as preachy! I just thought I needed to explain how the CPU power necessary (and therefore, energy consumption) had increased so drastically that while Jack was able to mine bitcoin years ago, now he'd need to lease a server farm. The Djinn were commenting on it overly harshly because they know of something better that works for them up in their higher dimension. The Djinn do not necessarily get everything right.
Jack
4/2/22, 4:58 AM
Hot damn! I am so excited that another story has been posted for this excellent series. I definitely have to support what @Feed Your Head said: Sam and Luke need to end up together, with the occasional visit from a particularly well-hung shy boy. Seriously, this was fucking hot, Author. **Absolutely** with the wait!
Jack
3/31/22, 5:45 AM
Hey, Soren! While I do absolutely love your work (Unintended Consequences of Time Travel and The Prince And The Frat Boys, especially), this is not a comment to ask you to write more. I just wanted to let you know that you're an incredible author, you make amazing content, and I am more than happy to wait! I know life can get crazy, and it's not always possible to write when and how we like, but my love of your talent isn't dependent on you getting it published within a certain time frame. I have a friend on this site who constantly tells me about how worried he is that no one will be interested in his stuff unless he publishes every week or every other week, and I just thought you deserved to know that at least one person out here is a loyal fan of yours. Take whatever time you need to take care of yourself, and whenever a new story or a new chapter comes out, you bet your ass I'll be pumping that view count up.

4/1/22, 7:03 AM
This is seriously such a good thing to hear. One of the hardest things about this drought of posting stories has been the lack of comment notifications. I’ve written so much that I’m excited to share, yet I’m so far from posting any of it. So I have to ride (sort of) off the high of comments like these. It’s great to know that I’m known for my talent at authorship and for being someone worth being loyal to. I don’t intend to let my fans down any time soon. Keep a lookout for more (and see if you can find my story in the contest entries! =P ) @Jack

Jack
4/2/22, 3:41 AM
@Soren Fitz I can totally understand feeling worried that people don't actually like your stuff. Feel free to reach out anytime (my email is on my profile) and I'll happily fanboy to my heart's content to let you know how much I enjoy your work!
2/10/22, 8:43 PM
WOW! What a great chapter. I love how they fought for dominance and the tables were turned. Is there a chance for a third chapter??? The story feels complete and at the same time there is a lot of room for more chapters if you like.

2/10/22, 9:29 PM
@BrzNLA .... I'm going to admit: there will be a third chapter. You have @Hypnothrill to thank for that. I had absolutely no intention in writing a third chapter. I had planned an epilogue. But after reader an early draft of Chapter 2, @Hypnothrill gave me reason to expand the epilogue into a full chapter. It won't be anything you guys are expecting. I don't want to say more. I would rather let the chapter surprise and speak for itself. It may take me a week before it's posted because as I said, I never planned to write it. And now I have to find time to crank the finale out.

4/2/22, 1:26 AM
@rubbrsome I can't wait for your next chapter! This is probably one of your best works honestly.