Recent Comments

3/20/25, 7:45 PM
hunterlism's comment made me read that story. As it's far from my usual stuff and doesn't match any of my kinks, it's not a story I'd read under normal circumstances. But man, this is so well written, and it does capture the unfulfilled dreams of countless of people. I was 38 when I finally turned my life around, so I agree, it's never too late. It's a wonderful and imaginative story, one of the few gems that are hidden on this site full of kinks and sex. Thank you for publishing this here.

3/20/25, 8:03 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Thank you so much for your kind words and for stepping outside your usual reading preferences and giving my story a chance. While I often write kink-focused stories, I also love exploring more personal themes and deeper parts of my life. It means a lot that you found this piece among all the content out there, and congratulations on turning your own life around at 38—that’s inspiring.
Nasu
3/20/25, 7:12 PM
This was such a good story in so many ways. The inspiration from folk tales was really well done. I liked how the characters were rendered attractive but not unnaturally hot, adding to the feeling of reading an erotica folk tale and not just porn. The sex scenes were really well integrated in the story. The character arcs were good, and even the happy ending was really satisfying. This felt like a refreshing story, thanks !
3/20/25, 6:30 PM
Loved this, very hot start!

3/20/25, 6:48 PM
@[BeastBro69](/user/show/277649) Thank you!!
3/20/25, 6:29 PM
Very hot story, I enjoyed it a lot
3/20/25, 6:27 PM
Love every chapter.
3/20/25, 6:19 PM
Excellent writing and such a cliffhanger. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
3/20/25, 5:09 PM
My favorite writer on this site is back!!!! The sandman part 2 please, or part 3 of the Great Mesmo! your writing is sooooo hot
3/17/25, 8:41 PM
So they they are played against each other? I still don't know how this will end.

3/20/25, 4:46 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) there's a few challenges left 😜
3/19/25, 4:03 AM
So glad we got a part 2 to this! Wasn’t expecting it to come so soon after my previous comment. To be totally honest, I *was* a little apprehensive at first with how this chapter seemed to recap the first, even down to the writing, but after the twist in the end, it almost seemed meta. I definitely didn’t see it coming and I thought mirroring the original story was really clever in that context. Again, loved the ending, and seeing more of Mesmo’s influence throughout. Hot story, and well worth the wait! You do stage hypnosis stories so well, and I hope we will see more in the future!

3/20/25, 3:24 PM
@[11037](/user/show/13616) Thank you for your comment! If I’m being honest I did cut and paste some text from the first chapter into the second (both to save time and because the same events happen in both chapters, just from different perspectives). Thanks for reading through to the end - I’m glad the payoff was worth it!
3/20/25, 3:00 PM
Love that there are pics