Recent Comments

4/1/22, 7:51 AM
Oops, @Martin, I think I tried too hard to repost my two comments to get them in the right order and now I'm stuck with two copies of the one that was supposed to be last. Any chance you could delete the first of those? (And this one, too, at that...)

Martin
4/2/22, 6:39 AM
@AgainstMyWill you should be able to delete and edit your own comment to fix that, if you're logged on!

4/2/22, 4:46 PM
@Martin I have a delete trash can icon for only that latest comment asking you to help clean them up. The other three no longer have that trash can or the edit pencil. (Lmk if you need screenshots or whatever if that's a bug.)
4/2/22, 3:56 PM
Where is chapter 10 I need it so bad 😭
4/2/22, 1:20 PM
fuck yea, keep goin bro
Rob
4/2/22, 12:08 PM
Wow that was super hot. Really looking forward to reading the rest.
4/2/22, 12:05 PM
Nice Plot. Looking forward to see the transformation into a tatted and Pierced Chav with a extreme haircut. Keep on going.
4/2/22, 9:59 AM
Really well written, could easily be a story from Weird Tales or something. Great job!
4/2/22, 6:58 AM
Very hot. thank you for sharing your story. Look forward to the chapter!
3/30/22, 2:50 PM
This is such a fun world! You’ve really fleshed out the characters, and now they have motivations, plans of action, ideas… they feel real, and this world feels full of possibility. I’m excited to see more.

4/2/22, 5:06 AM
@Soren Fitz Thank you! I have some fun angles to this world I have yet to reveal as well!
Anonymous
4/1/22, 7:13 PM
Don't particularly care about the preachy crypto bullshit but I'm glad this story is being continued

4/2/22, 5:05 AM
Oh, well, thanks for letting me know you felt the crypto explanation came across as preachy! I just thought I needed to explain how the CPU power necessary (and therefore, energy consumption) had increased so drastically that while Jack was able to mine bitcoin years ago, now he'd need to lease a server farm. The Djinn were commenting on it overly harshly because they know of something better that works for them up in their higher dimension. The Djinn do not necessarily get everything right.
Jack
4/2/22, 4:58 AM
Hot damn! I am so excited that another story has been posted for this excellent series. I definitely have to support what @Feed Your Head said: Sam and Luke need to end up together, with the occasional visit from a particularly well-hung shy boy. Seriously, this was fucking hot, Author. **Absolutely** with the wait!