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3/31/22, 5:16 PM
I hope to see part 2 someday
3/28/22, 6:20 PM
This was a surprisingly sweet story! My favourite part was the backstory about Danny and Will's relationship and the way that Will protected him. It was so lovely to see. It made Danny helping him out with getting off feel less opportunistic. I was a little bit confused about how Danny knew some of the information that he knew, though.

3/29/22, 8:24 PM
@time.to.occur - you make me wonder what info you're talking about. As the author, I know the whole story, so may miss explaining something :thinking:

3/29/22, 9:21 PM
@Math_Reez 💙Well, we follow Danny's perspective pretty closely through the story (third-person limited). But the way it comes across to me, Danny seems to have known exactly what has happened to Will with his co-worker at work, and I was confused about how he knew that. But to be clear, it didn't interfere with my enjoyment of the story!

3/31/22, 4:28 PM
@time.to.occur - okay, maybe it was a miss on my side when explaining stuff in english version. But after Dany makes Will watch the video he realizes his brother is hypnotized (at that point just a guess) then after questioning his brother, he told him what happened with him and Mike. Dany know about Mike and he knew the rumors about he being jealous of Will, but only learn about what happened between his brother and him after he interrogate Will in the trance state. Sorry if that wasn't clear :sweat_smile:
3/31/22, 4:15 PM
Himbo is my far the most adorable character on this website.

3/31/22, 4:24 PM
@Twan Andersen It is immense fun to write :innocent:
Anon
3/31/22, 11:02 AM
This is amazing! Any plans for sequels? I'd love to see what the villain does next to the others heroes with the help of the Boy Wonder, e.g. Superman or Green Lantern. Also I can't wait to see Bruce's face when he realizes that all his money is gone. So hot
Anon
3/31/22, 10:58 AM
OMG there's nothing hotter to me than a cocky Dick Grayson being taken down sexually. He's the ultimate pretty boy who needs to get his ego checked. Thank you!!!
Anonymous
3/31/22, 7:04 AM
I live to serve the virus
3/30/22, 6:31 PM
Wonderful story. You are excellent at describing the pathos of the characters. I love the playful jibes between Liam and Brett. They are a welcome comic relief in some extremely dramatic scenes. If the trip between Albion and Avon took 4 hours their transport would be flying around one to two times the speed of sound. I don't like people being punished for no reason so, however extreme, Sam earned his punishment. I think Liam would always feel guilty about what his father did to Brett if he hadn't taken the chance to administer justice on Sam. Albion is a horrible place but the goodness and love of some characters shines through. Liam and Brett are the main characters so someone's complaint about being tired of their story is a bit absurd. If Brett and Liam didn't have and need one another this story would have turned out very differently. As to the future of the series I imagine a time when Brett will have to choose to stay a breeder or be restored. I honestly cannot imagine what he would or should choose. I know his body was changed against his will and he hated being pregnant but perhaps he would worry about the future of his relationship with Liam. He might wonder if Liam would still love him if he could not bear children? Liam being a bull and Brett a breeder is an established dynamic. I'm not sure Brett would want to change that and risk losing Liam. Alternately they have two biological children already so maybe that would be enough and/or Brett could take the pussy drug to have sex with Liam to keep him happy? So many possibilities and variables at this point and other points in the story. It is remarkable that you have maintained the flow of this story throughout all it's twists and turns. I think ultimately Brett will become the man he was meant to be but only time will tell just who that man will be.

3/30/22, 7:20 PM
@Cutlerfan Thanks, glad you are enjoying the story. The speed of the transporters is faster than Concorde, but not by as much as you might imagine. The fastest time for Concorde to fly the Atlantic was 2hrs 52 (NYC to LHR). It would routinely fly to Barbados from London in around 3 hours 45 minutes. Sorry I nerded out a little. As an aside, my collaborator didn’t like the word transporter. He said that was a bit Star Trek. I told him it was Star Wars and, in the absence of any other term; I went with it. I think Sam got what he deserved he did after all blackmail his son into staying in Albion to save his mother, and that is the genesis of their bad blood. The rotten business with Brett was the step too far. I have an idea for a follow up story which would focus a little bit on Sam and his family story but when the last part of this is published it will be sometime before I revist this world. As for the options for Brett and Liam well that is the question? I hope I do them justice.

3/30/22, 8:52 PM
@Speedychopslover I'm sure it will be a great story whatever happens. I looked up the Concorde when I realized the distance. I almost mentioned it in my first comment so you didn't nerd out at all imo. All vehicles are a kind of transportation or transport.

3/31/22, 6:51 AM
@Speedychopslover Haha, it's not so much a dislike of the word "transporter", as it was an immediate picturing of characters disappearing in yellow or blue sparkles! I couldn't help but be disappointed when it was "just" a hypersonic flying machine.
Jack
3/31/22, 5:35 AM
GAH! I didn't expect this at all! I jumped on the site just to see if there was anything new to spark my interest and there's CHAPTER 2 OF ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES OF ALL TIME?!? And it's so fucking good! There's plot, character development, tendrils of a dozen different elements to explore, and just superior writing. I know there wasn't a whole lot of sex stuff in this chapter, but it was clearly such a great addition to the story itself. I can't wait to see how you explore this, and how things develop between Finn, Rada, and Jack. I know I've always wanted Finn and Jack to end up together, but Rada deserves to be happy, as well! It's hard to tell for certain, but life in his dimension doesn't seem all that fun to me. Regardless, the paths you've laid out in this chapter are enticing, and I can't wait for more. Thank you for taking the time to write more of this story, Author. This has really been such a treat!

3/31/22, 6:14 AM
@Jack You were so strongly on Team Finn I was worried that you would not like this chapter since it's Rada focused
3/30/22, 5:35 PM
Great writing. Love the way you have avoided many of the tropes of so many Djin stories. Love the subtle almost subversive relationship dynamics. Overall, this is terrific.

3/31/22, 6:13 AM
@Speedychopslover Thank you. Avoiding the typical genie tropes was actually the driving force of why I started writing this.
3/30/22, 12:26 PM
LOVED the Genie explanation! magic as equals technology is such a fun premise and it's so engagingly depicted for us here. Jack is so cute and sweet i REALLY want him to use at least ONE MORE WISH, and REALLY DO NOT WANT him to use any other wishes. Rada is an amazing Genie, the most uniquely done I've seen. Bravo! a superb installment and continuation to a superb story.

3/31/22, 6:06 AM
@Mind Labyrinth so what do you want him to do with his second wish?