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3/30/22, 12:26 PM
LOVED the Genie explanation! magic as equals technology is such a fun premise and it's so engagingly depicted for us here. Jack is so cute and sweet i REALLY want him to use at least ONE MORE WISH, and REALLY DO NOT WANT him to use any other wishes. Rada is an amazing Genie, the most uniquely done I've seen. Bravo! a superb installment and continuation to a superb story.

3/31/22, 6:06 AM
@Mind Labyrinth so what do you want him to do with his second wish?
Anonymous
3/28/22, 1:03 AM
This story is awesome! Will there ever be a chapter three, or is this the end? I'd love to know what happens to Todd next.

3/28/22, 6:14 AM
So glad you like it! There's a little hanging bit where Mark starts putting together his next prank, which I cut out of this posting since it was not complete (which I think upset people, since it seems like the story just sorta trails off). I've never quite been drawn back to keep working on it, but who knows, maybe one day...

Anonymous
3/31/22, 12:50 AM
Got it. I've loved everything about this story so far, and Mark and Todd are two of the best characters I've ever read about in a hypnosis story. I'm really hoping you'll be inspired to finish the third chapter someday! 🙂

3/31/22, 5:40 AM
Thanks for the kind words! It's definitely encouraging!
3/31/22, 5:00 AM
LOVE this story - really hoping that you'll come back with Chapter 3 and more - great writing - hoping the size difference and masculine changes grow further and further - Awesome job!!
3/30/22, 2:34 PM
Finally read this—it’s so hot! I love how Finn dominates Jack, and the genie wish is so clever; the world is compelling and immersive. I feel like I’m in it. Your writing is always so fun.

3/31/22, 4:35 AM
@Soren Fitz Oh thank you! I think fun is a good way to describe this one!
Mar 29, 2022
Mitch_CoRob
3/31/22, 3:32 AM
So hot. Thank you for sharing! Loved this story and I hope you continue to write.
littledickslave@yahoo.com
3/29/22, 2:41 PM
Like any good fiction, this story is based on reality. When he was dating me, my husband trained me in the exquisite joy of cumming when being fucked or by using dildos. Dildos come in so many sizes, shapes, and textures that each gives a very different experience. Now that we are married, he never allows me to stroke myself, but to cum for him only when he is fucking me or I am using one of my silicone lovers. He has been reading this and has now ordered me my first set of thongs. He is very excited for them to arrive. Thanks for a great story!

3/29/22, 4:14 PM
@littledickslave@yahoo.com that's awesome that my story has inspired you in real life. Hopefully by the time the final chapter is released you can wear your thong and ride a dildo while you read!

littledickslave@yahoo.com
3/29/22, 7:18 PM
@GoonNoob Yes, he has decided to try thongs. I have not seen what he ordered, but he said it was time I look pretty as well as slutty for him. I expect he will want me to perform for him both in a thong and with a dildo or two, but I don't know.

3/29/22, 7:48 PM
@littledickslave@yahoo.com I'm sure you'll look slutty for him, with a dildo in your hole and a sucking on a second dildo.

littledickslave@yahoo.com
3/31/22, 2:42 AM
@GoonNoob I'll do my very best so my husband gets hard and cums watching me.
Ember
3/14/22, 5:23 AM
Am I right in thinking this was inspired by this comic? https://e621.net/posts/1598855

Just Some Dude
3/31/22, 2:13 AM
I thought the exact same thing lmaoo @Ember
Anonymous
3/31/22, 2:12 AM
I wonder what would happen if he hired another professional hypnotist to try and counter Jamie's control over him? 🤔
Cum Eater
3/30/22, 10:15 PM
My Cock stands at attention almost the entire time I've been reading this story. Hot!
3/30/22, 4:24 PM
Hmm interesting. And sexy. Also its amusing that it was Brock who is dating Mike, I figured you would go the route of the more common POV character (which I think was Jason) having the 'better' ending, but this is interesting. I am glad that the love is real, that the happiness is allowed to happen. That is sweet. Love how Mike is the dom top for them and is able to rim and fuck their asses till they are moaning messes, and then continue onward. So yeah nice stuff there. Also looking forward to Officer Adams being given his cuppance. Maybe he can become a slutty subby cop pup. Maybe he is assigned as a partner to a gay cop or a community outreach program and finds himself becoming a good pet for said man. Anyway, yeah, this was interesting. Some parts were sexier then others but all in all this was a good, fun, nicely done, interesting plotted series. So thumbs up to you for writing it. And also finishing it, nice accomplishment.

3/30/22, 9:44 PM
@Heru Kane Jason is the major POV character, with Zeus and Mike secondary giving an outsider’s perspective to their antics. Originally both of them were to have the same, more neutral ending but as the story continued (and i think it might have been you who suggested that I make B&J more different) I just liked the idea of giving them separate outcomes. I think Brock had an unconscious crush on Jason growing up and never acted upon it, whereas Mike gave him what he needed to be happy. I love tiny tops with big bottoms and the power flip that comes with it. Mike may not be tiny per-say, but he is every reader who’s been a skinny boy looking up at a muscled hunk and wishing he could dick them down. I like that idea for Officer Adams. It will be interesting writing as someone who is truly reprehensible getting their comeuppance. It’s interesting that people gravitated towards the sweet stuff rather than the more heavy bdsm side of things. You’d think it would be the other way round. Maybe I created my Thieves too lovable lol. Valuable data, as Dubcon would say. Thank you Heru Kane for your comments over the past 8 chapters. You’ve helped steer me in the right direction to write not only for myself but for others. Hopefully you continue to be a fan going forward x

3/30/22, 9:56 PM
@GoonNoob Thumbs up! It was a good saga and story. And yeah, at least for me, I like more 'happy' elements then heavy stuff. Like I don't enjoy ruinings of lives and more dudes becoming blissful good boys. I think part of the thing is that the characters you set up here weren't really bad people per say. I mean yeah, they were thieves but they didn't bash or kill or attack, they weren't sexist or homophobic or racist. Because of that them keeping their origional attitudes, just shifted towards the gay end of things, was totally fine. Officer Adams though needs to be a good boy, he can become blissful and happy and a pet. I, personally, wouldn't want him to loose his job or go to jail or anything horrible, but him becoming a good subby boy for a particular gay guy while also still being visibley who he was, for all now its a fake, on an actual working level, sounds fun. Also him becoming a police pup sounds, and is, totally sexy. hehe But yeah, I did find it intriguing that Jason - who was like the pov dude - was the one not accepting of things while at times it seemed more him that would accept things. Its a choice and such but it was different than I thought since a bunch of times it seemed like he was a bit more with it and such. But yeah, good and fun stuff here. I'll definitely give your future stuff a read through, especially if it has the tags and themes and stuff that I find interesting.