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littledickslave@yahoo.com
3/29/22, 2:41 PM
Like any good fiction, this story is based on reality. When he was dating me, my husband trained me in the exquisite joy of cumming when being fucked or by using dildos. Dildos come in so many sizes, shapes, and textures that each gives a very different experience. Now that we are married, he never allows me to stroke myself, but to cum for him only when he is fucking me or I am using one of my silicone lovers. He has been reading this and has now ordered me my first set of thongs. He is very excited for them to arrive. Thanks for a great story!

3/29/22, 4:14 PM
@littledickslave@yahoo.com that's awesome that my story has inspired you in real life. Hopefully by the time the final chapter is released you can wear your thong and ride a dildo while you read!

littledickslave@yahoo.com
3/29/22, 7:18 PM
@GoonNoob Yes, he has decided to try thongs. I have not seen what he ordered, but he said it was time I look pretty as well as slutty for him. I expect he will want me to perform for him both in a thong and with a dildo or two, but I don't know.

3/29/22, 7:48 PM
@littledickslave@yahoo.com I'm sure you'll look slutty for him, with a dildo in your hole and a sucking on a second dildo.

littledickslave@yahoo.com
3/31/22, 2:42 AM
@GoonNoob I'll do my very best so my husband gets hard and cums watching me.
Ember
3/14/22, 5:23 AM
Am I right in thinking this was inspired by this comic? https://e621.net/posts/1598855

Just Some Dude
3/31/22, 2:13 AM
I thought the exact same thing lmaoo @Ember
Anonymous
3/31/22, 2:12 AM
I wonder what would happen if he hired another professional hypnotist to try and counter Jamie's control over him? 🤔
Cum Eater
3/30/22, 10:15 PM
My Cock stands at attention almost the entire time I've been reading this story. Hot!
3/30/22, 4:24 PM
Hmm interesting. And sexy. Also its amusing that it was Brock who is dating Mike, I figured you would go the route of the more common POV character (which I think was Jason) having the 'better' ending, but this is interesting. I am glad that the love is real, that the happiness is allowed to happen. That is sweet. Love how Mike is the dom top for them and is able to rim and fuck their asses till they are moaning messes, and then continue onward. So yeah nice stuff there. Also looking forward to Officer Adams being given his cuppance. Maybe he can become a slutty subby cop pup. Maybe he is assigned as a partner to a gay cop or a community outreach program and finds himself becoming a good pet for said man. Anyway, yeah, this was interesting. Some parts were sexier then others but all in all this was a good, fun, nicely done, interesting plotted series. So thumbs up to you for writing it. And also finishing it, nice accomplishment.

3/30/22, 9:44 PM
@Heru Kane Jason is the major POV character, with Zeus and Mike secondary giving an outsider’s perspective to their antics. Originally both of them were to have the same, more neutral ending but as the story continued (and i think it might have been you who suggested that I make B&J more different) I just liked the idea of giving them separate outcomes. I think Brock had an unconscious crush on Jason growing up and never acted upon it, whereas Mike gave him what he needed to be happy. I love tiny tops with big bottoms and the power flip that comes with it. Mike may not be tiny per-say, but he is every reader who’s been a skinny boy looking up at a muscled hunk and wishing he could dick them down. I like that idea for Officer Adams. It will be interesting writing as someone who is truly reprehensible getting their comeuppance. It’s interesting that people gravitated towards the sweet stuff rather than the more heavy bdsm side of things. You’d think it would be the other way round. Maybe I created my Thieves too lovable lol. Valuable data, as Dubcon would say. Thank you Heru Kane for your comments over the past 8 chapters. You’ve helped steer me in the right direction to write not only for myself but for others. Hopefully you continue to be a fan going forward x

3/30/22, 9:56 PM
@GoonNoob Thumbs up! It was a good saga and story. And yeah, at least for me, I like more 'happy' elements then heavy stuff. Like I don't enjoy ruinings of lives and more dudes becoming blissful good boys. I think part of the thing is that the characters you set up here weren't really bad people per say. I mean yeah, they were thieves but they didn't bash or kill or attack, they weren't sexist or homophobic or racist. Because of that them keeping their origional attitudes, just shifted towards the gay end of things, was totally fine. Officer Adams though needs to be a good boy, he can become blissful and happy and a pet. I, personally, wouldn't want him to loose his job or go to jail or anything horrible, but him becoming a good subby boy for a particular gay guy while also still being visibley who he was, for all now its a fake, on an actual working level, sounds fun. Also him becoming a police pup sounds, and is, totally sexy. hehe But yeah, I did find it intriguing that Jason - who was like the pov dude - was the one not accepting of things while at times it seemed more him that would accept things. Its a choice and such but it was different than I thought since a bunch of times it seemed like he was a bit more with it and such. But yeah, good and fun stuff here. I'll definitely give your future stuff a read through, especially if it has the tags and themes and stuff that I find interesting.
3/30/22, 3:17 PM
The urge to eat out Jason and Brock… is high! Cross contamination be damned give me those pussy lips!

3/30/22, 9:25 PM
@SweetPupLance Press their giant, sweat shiny asses together and chow down! Everyone deserves a lil bit of Pink.
3/30/22, 10:43 AM
What an INCREDIBLE ending! I like that you provided just enough detail as to what was happening without giving too much away; the mystery is part of the fun. And you present some great moral questions here, too: in a way, Jason has become enslaved, but so happy and stupid that he isn’t even aware of it…that’s still slavery, but is there any other possible fate for him? And I must admit I am glad Mike got a happy ending, although again, there’s a sadness there: Brock can only be sentient/self-aware for a few hours at a time, and that’s tragic. I also find it interesting that at least one Dubcon member had enough compassion to allow Brock and Mike to remain happy together—they must be the ones providing the Blue…perhaps they’re not entirely heartless. My only question is: how would Pink change if it was placed on other objects? If that briefcase had been full of diapers, would they become ABDL? What about cigars, or leather? What a powerful chemical… So to recap: an amazing, philosophical story with traces of horror, tragedy, comedy, social commentary, and my favorite kinks (muscle growth and brain-draining). You are a rising star, Goon Noob! Congratulations on a fantastic job! :)

3/30/22, 9:24 PM
@Feed Your Head what great praise! Originally they were both going to have the same, kinda neutral ending but I enjoyed giving Brock and Mike a true happily ever after and Jason a somewhat dubious one, but it's up for the reader to say if what happened is good or bad. I'll say that Dubcon Corp as a whole does reward good behaviour of those that play their games, and as Officer Adams will one day find out, those who, as the kids say, Fuck around and Find out. Interesting question. With the cigars and leather it's pretty easy to say 'yes' as they can appreciate the taste & smells of cigars and the smell, feel & fashion of leather. With diapers, much as they did mental flips to arrive at the conclusion as to why wearing only thongs was the only option, I would say that Diapers laced with Pink would make them appreciate the convenience of not having to go the bathroom and just going wherever they are, so the DL part is certain but the AB stuff I'm not sure about. Once again, thanks for all your support. It's really encouraging for me to get started on the next series!
3/30/22, 10:17 AM
Wow great final ending for now - I am not normally into stories like this, but it got me hooked - Thanks I will look out for what happens to Officer Adams

3/30/22, 9:11 PM
@MalSkin Glad you gave it a chance and stayed till the end.
Mar 26, 2022
3/30/22, 6:46 PM
Great to see you posting again! A very hot story.
Mar 28, 2022
suitedsubmissive
3/30/22, 4:00 PM
Very, VERY hot story, Sir. I love transformations like this...a hotshot young exec turned into a submissive blue collar slob! Great writing and a clever idea...excited to read more from you!

3/30/22, 6:38 PM
Thanks, @suitedsubmissive! Always happy to leave a guy begging for more… 😉