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3/30/22, 3:17 PM
The urge to eat out Jason and Brock… is high! Cross contamination be damned give me those pussy lips!

3/30/22, 9:25 PM
@SweetPupLance Press their giant, sweat shiny asses together and chow down! Everyone deserves a lil bit of Pink.
3/30/22, 10:43 AM
What an INCREDIBLE ending! I like that you provided just enough detail as to what was happening without giving too much away; the mystery is part of the fun. And you present some great moral questions here, too: in a way, Jason has become enslaved, but so happy and stupid that he isn’t even aware of it…that’s still slavery, but is there any other possible fate for him? And I must admit I am glad Mike got a happy ending, although again, there’s a sadness there: Brock can only be sentient/self-aware for a few hours at a time, and that’s tragic. I also find it interesting that at least one Dubcon member had enough compassion to allow Brock and Mike to remain happy together—they must be the ones providing the Blue…perhaps they’re not entirely heartless. My only question is: how would Pink change if it was placed on other objects? If that briefcase had been full of diapers, would they become ABDL? What about cigars, or leather? What a powerful chemical… So to recap: an amazing, philosophical story with traces of horror, tragedy, comedy, social commentary, and my favorite kinks (muscle growth and brain-draining). You are a rising star, Goon Noob! Congratulations on a fantastic job! :)

3/30/22, 9:24 PM
@Feed Your Head what great praise! Originally they were both going to have the same, kinda neutral ending but I enjoyed giving Brock and Mike a true happily ever after and Jason a somewhat dubious one, but it's up for the reader to say if what happened is good or bad. I'll say that Dubcon Corp as a whole does reward good behaviour of those that play their games, and as Officer Adams will one day find out, those who, as the kids say, Fuck around and Find out. Interesting question. With the cigars and leather it's pretty easy to say 'yes' as they can appreciate the taste & smells of cigars and the smell, feel & fashion of leather. With diapers, much as they did mental flips to arrive at the conclusion as to why wearing only thongs was the only option, I would say that Diapers laced with Pink would make them appreciate the convenience of not having to go the bathroom and just going wherever they are, so the DL part is certain but the AB stuff I'm not sure about. Once again, thanks for all your support. It's really encouraging for me to get started on the next series!
3/30/22, 10:17 AM
Wow great final ending for now - I am not normally into stories like this, but it got me hooked - Thanks I will look out for what happens to Officer Adams

3/30/22, 9:11 PM
@MalSkin Glad you gave it a chance and stayed till the end.
Mar 26, 2022
3/30/22, 6:46 PM
Great to see you posting again! A very hot story.
Mar 28, 2022
suitedsubmissive
3/30/22, 4:00 PM
Very, VERY hot story, Sir. I love transformations like this...a hotshot young exec turned into a submissive blue collar slob! Great writing and a clever idea...excited to read more from you!

3/30/22, 6:38 PM
Thanks, @suitedsubmissive! Always happy to leave a guy begging for more… 😉
Mar 28, 2022
3/28/22, 5:35 AM
This was an absolute favorite of mine glad to see it posted here thank you so much for sharing.

3/30/22, 6:36 PM
You’re very welcome, @Papa Werebear!
Mar 26, 2022
suitedsubmissive
3/30/22, 6:27 PM
Excellent story, Sir!
3/29/22, 1:55 AM
You have a skill for writing this kind of story, more please

3/30/22, 6:05 PM
@fleed412 Thank you for your kind words. I've got several ideas for the next chapter - just need to make the time to write it now!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
3/30/22, 3:31 PM
Wow! I have not read the original this is based on (I will when finished with this!) but I am always at my best when given simple rules to follow and when I don't have to worry about how to act, how to think or what to do when with a man. These rules are so perfect!
3/30/22, 1:29 PM
No, not this time. The endless usage of fag and pedo - PEDO! - was beyond vile. Even in a fictional story --- no ESPECIALLY in a fictional porn story - there's no place for it with all that is going on in Florida and MAGA land. It is tone deaf and should be removed. A huge disappointment. Do better next time.

Martin
3/30/22, 1:38 PM
@Rich56 I can understand why you don't like the story. But just because what happens in a story is vile and something we really hate, it's no reason to censor that story. ESPECIALLY because something like that is probably really happening somewhere this very moment. And, tbf, while it's really bad what's happening in MAGA land, this is nothing compared to other countries where you're locked up or even killed because you're gay.