Recent Comments

3/30/22, 1:29 PM
No, not this time. The endless usage of fag and pedo - PEDO! - was beyond vile. Even in a fictional story --- no ESPECIALLY in a fictional porn story - there's no place for it with all that is going on in Florida and MAGA land. It is tone deaf and should be removed. A huge disappointment. Do better next time.

Martin
3/30/22, 1:38 PM
@Rich56 I can understand why you don't like the story. But just because what happens in a story is vile and something we really hate, it's no reason to censor that story. ESPECIALLY because something like that is probably really happening somewhere this very moment. And, tbf, while it's really bad what's happening in MAGA land, this is nothing compared to other countries where you're locked up or even killed because you're gay.
3/29/22, 10:21 AM
- I'm almost tearing up here. - If I understood the premise correctly, this is happening on earth just in the distant future. In that case I wonder where in the world Albion and Avon are located. Can't believe we will have to wait two weeks to read the final chapter!

3/29/22, 4:36 PM
@Reader Thanks as ever. This is all a little spoilerish but I appreciate your continued engagement in the tale, and feedback.

3/29/22, 9:41 PM
@Speedychopslover You think I should maybe edit that? My logic was that people who reached this stage will be ones that have already read the chapter, but I can edit it if you think it would be for the best

3/29/22, 9:55 PM
@Reader No. It is fine. I sometimes look at the comments section to see what people are saying about a story gives me an idea if I might want to read it or not. These will be down way down that list in a few days. Thanks for the offer though. Just don't give away the ending when I post it the last part ;-)

3/30/22, 7:01 AM
@Speedychopslover Went on the safe side, at least you read the comment so it did it's job. I do still wonder about the geography of Albion and Avon though

3/30/22, 1:16 PM
@Reader Generally Albion is somewhere on the North American continent and Avon is somewhere in Northern Europe. I am not really sure that those references to the world as we know it now make a great deal of sense but in my head that is sort of where they were.
Mar 29, 2022
3/30/22, 1:06 PM
I really loved this story and I hope for a sequel!
Anonymous
3/30/22, 11:25 AM
Very glad you're revisiting this! It always felt like there were Consequences to be explored.
3/30/22, 10:45 AM
Sexy and touching tale.
3/30/22, 9:02 AM
Really enjoyed this story I suppose for me what would have made it better was that Superboy becomes the villians sidekick in the end, (But i like stories like that )
3/30/22, 8:45 AM
This was already one of my favourite stories from nifty's authoritarian section, but reading it here again was just as sexy as the first time. Amazing one, simply sublime.
3/30/22, 7:09 AM
Glad that you continued the story. This chapter is as great as the others.
3/30/22, 7:08 AM
I really hope we get to see Brett fully restored to bull fucking the he'll out of Liam and York!!!
rwriter51
3/30/22, 4:36 AM
Ooohhh! Sammy gets me so wet. I think he's everyone's favorite Alpha stud.