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3/20/25, 6:30 PM
Loved this, very hot start!

3/20/25, 6:48 PM
@[BeastBro69](/user/show/277649) Thank you!!
3/20/25, 6:29 PM
Very hot story, I enjoyed it a lot
3/20/25, 6:27 PM
Love every chapter.
3/20/25, 6:19 PM
Excellent writing and such a cliffhanger. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
3/20/25, 5:09 PM
My favorite writer on this site is back!!!! The sandman part 2 please, or part 3 of the Great Mesmo! your writing is sooooo hot
3/17/25, 8:41 PM
So they they are played against each other? I still don't know how this will end.

3/20/25, 4:46 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) there's a few challenges left 😜
3/19/25, 4:03 AM
So glad we got a part 2 to this! Wasn’t expecting it to come so soon after my previous comment. To be totally honest, I *was* a little apprehensive at first with how this chapter seemed to recap the first, even down to the writing, but after the twist in the end, it almost seemed meta. I definitely didn’t see it coming and I thought mirroring the original story was really clever in that context. Again, loved the ending, and seeing more of Mesmo’s influence throughout. Hot story, and well worth the wait! You do stage hypnosis stories so well, and I hope we will see more in the future!

3/20/25, 3:24 PM
@[11037](/user/show/13616) Thank you for your comment! If I’m being honest I did cut and paste some text from the first chapter into the second (both to save time and because the same events happen in both chapters, just from different perspectives). Thanks for reading through to the end - I’m glad the payoff was worth it!
3/20/25, 3:00 PM
Love that there are pics
3/20/25, 1:16 PM
MY favorite thing about your writing is your attention to the smells... when one of your men smell the crotch and notice musk and chlorine.... when he gets close... and its musky and thick... oh my. These are the ways you know you like men ... when you like the way they look and taste and smell. You are the BEST writer. THANKYOU. I cant wait to see what happens next. I love this storyline.
Anonymous
3/20/25, 9:46 AM
This makes no sense at all!