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3/29/22, 10:41 PM
Henry is the perfect combination of sinister and sexy, romantic but menacing. Great character.
3/29/22, 10:24 PM
The word is out. Ev is out. Oh, he is fair game for every dick extent. Jack Parker, you are a genius.
Mar 29, 2022
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
3/29/22, 7:54 PM
Weight gain like this is one of my greatest fantasies -- but one I have never and probably will never fulfill. It scares me too much. But the image of bring a naked fattened pig, face deep into a box of doughnuts while gobbling them up fast as I am being fucked is damned hot! I want to be one of Carl's dough boys!
Jack
4/23/21, 6:01 AM
This has got to be one of the best genie/wish stories on this site. The writing is unique, powerful, and deeply hot. I know it's been a couple of years, but I wish you would write another chapter or two! Do you know how often I've thought about this story, come back to it, and how often I've cum reading it? I've always imagined what it would be like to see Finn come back to Jack, desperate for more, or Jack making other thought out wishes. If I had your talent, I might have already written a chapter already, but I wouldn't be able to do it justice. Some stories deserve to be written; deserve to exist. Surely, the future of Finn and Jack is one of those stories.

5/2/21, 5:13 AM
@Jack Thank you so much for your comment, and my apologies it's taken more than a week to reply. I wanted to sit at my PC and type comfortably and not scrawl a quick reply on my phone, and then it slipped my mind. Originally, I did intend to write several more chapters. My idea was that I would stay with Jack never using more wishes and I would explore what happened when he, emboldened by his wish, had the confidence to start messing around with other guys; eventually he would realize he was enslaving them, and then what would he do? (The genie's idea that he wanted to collect a harem was in fact the original point of the story, though not the character's intentions.) However, when I actually wrote the first part it came out much more intense than I expected, and even had a slightly romantic vibe, and more shockingly *people were into that*. The story as you can tell from the icons got good ratings. Authors can see the actual numbers; they were intimidatingly good which made me feel like it was either too much to live up to, or a fluke. So I just kind of bounced away from writing for a while, and kept thinking about how I wanted to proceed with follow-up. However, nothing ever felt like it was going to go as right as the first part if I stayed on the original plan. I also found myself less excited by the idea of exploring Jack's increasing corruption as well, as I had another story idea about someone getting more explicit magical powers and being corrupted by them. Meanwhile, I did like the potential of the intense dynamic between the two guys, and heartened by the response people had to the romantic elements, I decided to take a chance with the weirdest idea I ever had for a story, the tale of Santa bringing someone a helpless himbo as a Christmas present. And that of course, is [the Reindeer Clause](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10000408) which ended up as an 88,000 word novel. (Have you read it? People said they liked it...) I really appreciate you letting me know this story remains one of your faves and that it's gotten you off many times. I mean really, that makes me feel very good. (Are we talking like once a year or like... once a month??). I have so many ideas I don't have time to write as it is, but you never know, it's always possible I'll have that writer's equivalent of the speorg note for this story and suddenly a sequel will jump the line. I just honestly don't see it happening this year. But writing what will turn people on though... that's always motivation.

Jack
5/5/21, 5:11 AM
@Nocturne13 I have read The Reindeer Clause! It's good, but I do prefer this story. And I come back to this story every couple of weeks. Sometimes I just like reading it, but most of the time I'm fucking dousing myself in jizz.

3/26/22, 3:38 AM
@Jack Since you have read this so many times, I wanted to let you know before you freak out that I did just make some very minor edits, mostly just final proofread type corrections that never got uploaded. (When you get this comment they won't be live yet; likely by tomorrow though.) Plus I cross-published it to gay Cupid stories. If you do see any new booboos next time you read it, just let me know. I was careful to not change anything substantial so it should still be the story as you like it. I just added a few lines here and there which didn't get onto the page before.

Jack
3/28/22, 3:18 AM
@Nocturne13 I've read the new version a couple of times in the last two days, and I've spent a long minute trying to figure out exactly what to say. You already know that this has been one of my favorite stories on the site so far. These new edits have taken what was incredible and made it even better. I think I caught all of them, but the one that just fucking melted me entirely was "a part of me belongs to you now, and it always will." God, I made a sound when I read that line that I'm not proud of. I'm definitely going to be reading this story _more_ now that you've added on to it. Of course, I also have to deal with the insanely painful idea that there's no chapter 2. There's a sweetness and a romanticism here that's hard to find and harder to write! You've got Finn, the hunk sex worker who can't really have genuine connections, and Jack, the sweet twink who can't seem to find genuine connections. I love the dynamic that the genie and the magic brings, but I really, really want those two to find happiness with each other! THIS STORY IS JUST SO GOOD! :sob: :sob: :sob:

3/28/22, 3:26 AM
@Jack Not to be a tease but yeah there's more. But not a chunk that you would find satisfying yet, I think. So, more is coming. It wasn't planned but the brain spits out what it wants to spit out.

Jack
3/28/22, 11:50 AM
@Nocturne13 I'm happy to wait. Your talent is certainly worth waiting for.

3/28/22, 4:19 PM
@Jack You're such a sweetheart. You loving this story definitely had an impact on me writing more. Also it's now officially cross posted to the other sites so you can rate it on romance and BDSM (or as I'm thinking of it, power exchange elements).

Jack
3/29/22, 6:41 PM
@Nocturne13 I've rated them with the two new categories (5 on both, obviously). And, just in case you need to hear this, I am _always_ up to fanboy your writing if ever you need a boost to help you write, even if it's not with this specific story. There's a link to my email on my profile that you are welcome to use. You're a fucking amazing author and you deserve to know that!
Anonymous
3/29/22, 6:00 PM
Always a favorite. Always worth a re-read
3/29/22, 4:14 PM
The writing is amazing and the story is so inventive, detailed, and hot as fuck. What an amazing story you’re crafting!!
3/29/22, 3:25 PM
Thanks for the story! Right up my alley! Hope it contntinues!

3/29/22, 3:33 PM
@Beardfull1 It has on my SubscribeStar account, I might post the subsequent chapters here in a few weeks once they've gotten me as many subscribers as they can, but if you want to read chapters 2&3 sooner check it out. There'll only be four chapters for now but I'll return to it at some point.
3/29/22, 2:28 PM
I’m loving this story. Galen enjoying many of the changes is very hot, and having him narrate his discoveries of how the world has changed with each wish adds so much. The changes themselves are extremely hot. I am also very excited at the prospect of Galen going back and turning the tables on Steven with his bigger dick.
3/29/22, 2:17 PM
That was amazing! it was everything I fantasy about. Thank You for writing such a. Amazon story.
Evan
3/29/22, 9:31 AM
Damn. I love this series! Thanks for another awesome chapter.