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Mar 26, 2022
3/30/22, 6:46 PM
Great to see you posting again! A very hot story.
Mar 28, 2022
suitedsubmissive
3/30/22, 4:00 PM
Very, VERY hot story, Sir. I love transformations like this...a hotshot young exec turned into a submissive blue collar slob! Great writing and a clever idea...excited to read more from you!

3/30/22, 6:38 PM
Thanks, @suitedsubmissive! Always happy to leave a guy begging for more… 😉
Mar 28, 2022
3/28/22, 5:35 AM
This was an absolute favorite of mine glad to see it posted here thank you so much for sharing.

3/30/22, 6:36 PM
You’re very welcome, @Papa Werebear!
Mar 26, 2022
suitedsubmissive
3/30/22, 6:27 PM
Excellent story, Sir!
3/29/22, 1:55 AM
You have a skill for writing this kind of story, more please

3/30/22, 6:05 PM
@fleed412 Thank you for your kind words. I've got several ideas for the next chapter - just need to make the time to write it now!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
3/30/22, 3:31 PM
Wow! I have not read the original this is based on (I will when finished with this!) but I am always at my best when given simple rules to follow and when I don't have to worry about how to act, how to think or what to do when with a man. These rules are so perfect!
3/30/22, 1:29 PM
No, not this time. The endless usage of fag and pedo - PEDO! - was beyond vile. Even in a fictional story --- no ESPECIALLY in a fictional porn story - there's no place for it with all that is going on in Florida and MAGA land. It is tone deaf and should be removed. A huge disappointment. Do better next time.

Martin
3/30/22, 1:38 PM
@Rich56 I can understand why you don't like the story. But just because what happens in a story is vile and something we really hate, it's no reason to censor that story. ESPECIALLY because something like that is probably really happening somewhere this very moment. And, tbf, while it's really bad what's happening in MAGA land, this is nothing compared to other countries where you're locked up or even killed because you're gay.
3/29/22, 10:21 AM
- I'm almost tearing up here. - If I understood the premise correctly, this is happening on earth just in the distant future. In that case I wonder where in the world Albion and Avon are located. Can't believe we will have to wait two weeks to read the final chapter!

3/29/22, 4:36 PM
@Reader Thanks as ever. This is all a little spoilerish but I appreciate your continued engagement in the tale, and feedback.

3/29/22, 9:41 PM
@Speedychopslover You think I should maybe edit that? My logic was that people who reached this stage will be ones that have already read the chapter, but I can edit it if you think it would be for the best

3/29/22, 9:55 PM
@Reader No. It is fine. I sometimes look at the comments section to see what people are saying about a story gives me an idea if I might want to read it or not. These will be down way down that list in a few days. Thanks for the offer though. Just don't give away the ending when I post it the last part ;-)

3/30/22, 7:01 AM
@Speedychopslover Went on the safe side, at least you read the comment so it did it's job. I do still wonder about the geography of Albion and Avon though

3/30/22, 1:16 PM
@Reader Generally Albion is somewhere on the North American continent and Avon is somewhere in Northern Europe. I am not really sure that those references to the world as we know it now make a great deal of sense but in my head that is sort of where they were.
Mar 29, 2022
3/30/22, 1:06 PM
I really loved this story and I hope for a sequel!
Anonymous
3/30/22, 11:25 AM
Very glad you're revisiting this! It always felt like there were Consequences to be explored.