Recent Comments

rwriter51
3/29/22, 4:51 AM
Wonderful characters It's so good to see fleshed out characters in a story. If this is an example of your overall writing style, I'd say you have a brilliant future. :thumbsup:
3/28/22, 2:01 AM
The absolute evil of this tist is BEYOND sexy...love that you're putting out some hetero leaning stories here too. Please tell me we'll see more of this absolutely masterfully cruel tist!

3/28/22, 6:10 AM
@EdIam Hmm... maybe! There's nothing in my mind right now but I also once told someone there would never be a sequel to the first part, so who knows! Definitely want to keep taking it somewhere at least a little new and not just keep treading water, so, we'll have to see! But my 'tists are usually jerks so check out some of my other stories if you haven't already!

3/28/22, 3:15 PM
@StageShowMM oh I’ve def read all your work. I’m always excited to see more work from you. Very descriptive, fantastic writing, and the level of sociopathic tists that get me going.

3/29/22, 4:34 AM
@EdIam That's so flattering to hear! Thank you!
Anonymous
3/28/22, 8:56 AM
Eagerly waiting for part 6. When will it be posted?

3/28/22, 3:21 PM
@Anonymous Part 6 is on it's way. I am just about to submit it for approval. Part 7, the final part is long, and time constraints over the next couple of weeks will mean editing it for publication will take longer than expected. So that will be delayed I am guessing around the 10th April.

Martin
3/28/22, 3:27 PM
@Speedychopslover ARGHH!!! :blush: But of course, take all the time you need. Just know that we're biting our nails in anticipation and our dicks remain horribly neglected, too!

3/29/22, 4:26 AM
@Martin Thanks. Strangely enough writing 200k words was pretty easy. Editing something that long well that is really hard. :-)
Tyrol
3/29/22, 3:52 AM
I'm so fucking happy. Why am I so emotional? I wish there was a real life Avon to run away to.

3/29/22, 4:13 AM
@Tyrol Big Hug! :-)
3/29/22, 3:52 AM
I agree an aged up roxas and ventus! Maybe also add cloud strife and Zack Fair too! Maybe an aged up hiro Hamada as well.
3/29/22, 3:44 AM
Damn this was a hot chapter. Go Sammy!
3/29/22, 3:40 AM
Great story. Would love to see what happens when Davie gets home and meets Daddy Tom. Not to mention more tales of Daddies making boys over to suit their needs and kinks.
3/29/22, 2:11 AM
Thanks, I hate it. It's still hot no doubt about it. But I hate what Liam did to his dad(& Angel), whose crime was forcing him to move to Albion & roofied & mouth cunted Brett. Liam is worse than Sam, and maybe it's just me, but I'm kinda tired of Liam & Brett's story. I'm actually more invested on the side characters, and not just heavily focused one like Angel, but those that were left behind like Zach & Aiden. So far the villains that actually got their comeuppance are Jonas & his dad IMO. And I'm sure I'm not the only one thinking this but there's no way Albion has any semblance of a working government, especially with their bull supremacy. Anyone who went thru the academy would've known that being a bull meant jack shit considering a slip of concentrated pussy pill can take all of that away. The politicians would've turned each other into breeders in a fight for power & Albion would probably become a breeder supremacy government. I still appreciate your work though & did you ever posted somewhere before? I could've sworn I've read stories by speedychopslover before that's not this story. P. S. Angel reminds me of Austin from Chet Pectoral(the main character is basically Brett), too bad that story is left unfinished(you can find it on Nifty).

3/29/22, 2:34 AM
@bigbroprinny I am sorry you hate it. Can't please everyone. Thanks for the feedback though.
jack
3/29/22, 12:40 AM
Yussss that’s super hot! Thanks 😊
Anonymous
3/28/22, 11:50 PM
I know this was dark chapter which is not to everyone's liking. But for some of us, what happened to the boys is a huge turn-on. I was stroking my nipples through the whole scene in the jail cells.

3/29/22, 12:25 AM
@ glad you liked it. I agree with the comments that it was a tonal shift that many weren't expecting but I couldn't resist putting the Thong Fags into some horny trouble,