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Mar 26, 2022
3/27/22, 2:01 PM
Great to have you back, mcbaer! I also loved this one and thought it would have been perfect for the "Turnabout" contest.
Mar 26, 2022
3/27/22, 11:56 AM
Hope you're doing well! Loved this story!
3/25/22, 6:56 PM
The scene with the father was hot. Kinda wish he had went all the way and given Brett tits. I think it's maybe implied that the drug might have had some lasting effects to make Brett lean more into being a breeder bitch, which is hot.

3/26/22, 9:44 PM
@Dreamweavr Cheers glad you liked that scene. I could have taken it further but I felt I had put Brett through enough.

3/27/22, 9:45 AM
@Speedychopslover I think I kinda like it better this way, Brett acknowledging that his time ran out and "willfully" chose this make this much harder.

3/27/22, 11:52 AM
@Reader oh I agree it's better writing from a character standpoint, but for smutty smut purposes I would have found hotter.
3/27/22, 10:41 AM
Oh, Jack, another great series begins, in the middle. Keep it coming.
3/27/22, 5:01 AM
This is a commission? I've got to get me one of those from you then. This is probably the best TF story I've read on the site in quite a while. Your previous stories under other names have been really good too. The subtle changes, the fleeting hints of something being off but not being able to really fight it off. All of it is very great work. I definitely would love to get a commission from you if this is the kind of work you put in.

3/27/22, 8:16 AM
Thanks, @Berkley! I’d love to hear about your story ideas whenever you’re ready. Email me (listed up top by my name) and we can talk rates and stuff too.
3/27/22, 2:22 AM
Damn ! That was fucking hot Love the obliviousnes in here Thanks for writing

3/27/22, 7:36 AM
@NZcontroller Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it!
Mar 26, 2022
3/27/22, 6:02 AM
I'm glad you are posting again.
Evan
3/27/22, 2:50 AM
Transferring memories is a really fun mechanic for introducing this to someone. And, as always, love your work.

3/27/22, 3:33 AM
@Evan right? I love the idea of being trapped in a memory you can't get out of.
Mar 22, 2022
3/26/22, 10:10 AM
I actually sighed as I bust my third nut to this story - just a perfect intersection of so many of my 'interests' - 10/10 so hot

3/27/22, 2:38 AM
Thanks, @silverstat! I guess it’s pretty clear that I was just as into writing this commission as you were into reading it. There were a lot of the same themes as in my personal writing…
3/26/22, 11:22 PM
This is excellent! I really enjoy slower paced changes like this and there just aren't enough stories with it. I love the growing masculine disparity between the two. Tariq becoming this huge, tall, bodybuilding daddy and Dylan shrinking down to a little boy toy. And you are wonderfully capturing the slight changes in their awareness. At first they almost resist the changes to their physical self and attitude but slowly they accept and slip into their new roles. Hope to see more! I hope there are still some changes to come! Would love to see Tariq become absolutely massive and even more powerful and Dylan become even smaller and more submissive, really drive home that power disparity!

3/27/22, 2:30 AM
Thanks so much, @dredlifter! I was fortunate to have a commissioner who wanted a much longer story than my usual, which meant I could really luxuriate in the TF descriptions and world building. Two more chapters to go, with the last one being a lengthy examination of the aftermath. I think you’ll be pretty happy with the results, especially Tariq’s. His TF goes to a pretty wild extreme.