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3/25/22, 6:56 PM
The scene with the father was hot. Kinda wish he had went all the way and given Brett tits. I think it's maybe implied that the drug might have had some lasting effects to make Brett lean more into being a breeder bitch, which is hot.

3/26/22, 9:44 PM
@Dreamweavr Cheers glad you liked that scene. I could have taken it further but I felt I had put Brett through enough.

3/27/22, 9:45 AM
@Speedychopslover I think I kinda like it better this way, Brett acknowledging that his time ran out and "willfully" chose this make this much harder.

3/27/22, 11:52 AM
@Reader oh I agree it's better writing from a character standpoint, but for smutty smut purposes I would have found hotter.
3/27/22, 10:41 AM
Oh, Jack, another great series begins, in the middle. Keep it coming.
3/27/22, 5:01 AM
This is a commission? I've got to get me one of those from you then. This is probably the best TF story I've read on the site in quite a while. Your previous stories under other names have been really good too. The subtle changes, the fleeting hints of something being off but not being able to really fight it off. All of it is very great work. I definitely would love to get a commission from you if this is the kind of work you put in.

3/27/22, 8:16 AM
Thanks, @Berkley! I’d love to hear about your story ideas whenever you’re ready. Email me (listed up top by my name) and we can talk rates and stuff too.
3/27/22, 2:22 AM
Damn ! That was fucking hot Love the obliviousnes in here Thanks for writing

3/27/22, 7:36 AM
@NZcontroller Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it!
Mar 26, 2022
3/27/22, 6:02 AM
I'm glad you are posting again.
Evan
3/27/22, 2:50 AM
Transferring memories is a really fun mechanic for introducing this to someone. And, as always, love your work.

3/27/22, 3:33 AM
@Evan right? I love the idea of being trapped in a memory you can't get out of.
Mar 22, 2022
3/26/22, 10:10 AM
I actually sighed as I bust my third nut to this story - just a perfect intersection of so many of my 'interests' - 10/10 so hot

3/27/22, 2:38 AM
Thanks, @silverstat! I guess it’s pretty clear that I was just as into writing this commission as you were into reading it. There were a lot of the same themes as in my personal writing…
3/26/22, 11:22 PM
This is excellent! I really enjoy slower paced changes like this and there just aren't enough stories with it. I love the growing masculine disparity between the two. Tariq becoming this huge, tall, bodybuilding daddy and Dylan shrinking down to a little boy toy. And you are wonderfully capturing the slight changes in their awareness. At first they almost resist the changes to their physical self and attitude but slowly they accept and slip into their new roles. Hope to see more! I hope there are still some changes to come! Would love to see Tariq become absolutely massive and even more powerful and Dylan become even smaller and more submissive, really drive home that power disparity!

3/27/22, 2:30 AM
Thanks so much, @dredlifter! I was fortunate to have a commissioner who wanted a much longer story than my usual, which meant I could really luxuriate in the TF descriptions and world building. Two more chapters to go, with the last one being a lengthy examination of the aftermath. I think you’ll be pretty happy with the results, especially Tariq’s. His TF goes to a pretty wild extreme.
3/27/22, 12:12 AM
Loving it, absolutely loving it! I enjoyed that chapter so much I just don't want the story to end. The club scenes were really fun and exciting. I'm glad that B & J have finally found above the board jobs not that they got any entirely unmolested, I guess that's karma for a lifetime of crime. The interactions with Zeus are genuinely sweet and wholesome and shows that actually cares for all the boys and has their best interests at heart. Total Daddy. It's really refreshing to see that type of dynamic as opposed to the typical Dom/sub relationships you see in stories on GSS. Oh and Mike, don't get me started on him. I think he's fast becoming my favourite character. I love that he's evolved into a more central part of the story and has gotten some character development alongside the Himbros. I was stoked to see that he's getting on the thong-wearing fun as well, even if it wasn't one of the himbo-fying kind. Though if he's going to be hanging out with Zeus more, I'm still holding out hope that he might yet get whipped into muscle stud shape XD

3/27/22, 1:37 AM
@phillipsm isn't that the magic of writing fiction. I hadn't even thought about Mike when writing the first 2 chapters of the series and now he's become the heart of the story. Same for Zeus, who began life as just a way to get the boys gym equipment but now he's turned into the muscle dom daddy with the heart of gold. I honestly didn't set out to write a story with this much heart in it, but it seems there is a big demand for stories like this with equal parts horny action and introspection. I have ideas for new stories after I'm finished with Thong Fags that at the moment are just penis fuel but I wonder what will happen as characters start to come to life! So glad I started writing this, especially with kind comments like yours.

3/27/22, 2:23 AM
@GoonNoob I love a smutty story as much as the next reader don't get me wrong. But what I really crave most is a well-rounded narrative with a good balance of horny action and heart. While I can't speak for others, I can say with all certainty that I'd love to read more stories like this if you were so inclined to write them.
Anonymous
3/27/22, 12:38 AM
Another amazing chapter! Can't wait for the last one. You also captured so well why I love thongs: "He was always captivated by the thongs Jason and Brock always wore, having the confidence to wear something so sexy and revealing. Not just sexy, as jockstraps were equally all those things but thongs had a feminine stigma about them; a taboo." It's not just that they're revealing it's that the stigma that makes it more sexy for me compared to other revealing underwear like jockstraps as you mentioned.

3/27/22, 1:41 AM
@Anonymous completely agree with that statement. I wear a jockstrap out proudly when I'm in a club, but thongs are still a taboo secret for me, and I feel like such a slut when wearing them. Also, the feel of the string between my cheeks is a constant reminder, whereas I can forget I'm wearing a jock.