@Bluedegascar ABDL (adult baby diaper lover) is a fetish about an adult acting and presenting as someone in the baby/toddler age range, pedophilia is not an aspect, as the key part of the fetish is that it is seeing an adult act in these ways. Keep in mind when pointing fingers and kink shaming in the way you are, it’s very easy to do the same with hypnosis - for example, in hypnosis/mind control/brainwashing stories, there’s generally a lack of informed consent, no informed consent before sex is a type of rape, this is why we acknowledge these as stories, as fantasies, but know in reality this would be wrong. I think you may want to do a bit of self analysis before you go shaming peoples kinks.

@HypnoDuke Very well said. It's fine to say "This one makes me uncomfortable, can't get into it." but some self-awareness is in order. Given the array of kinks on this site, singling one out and saying that the people into it are bad is really not acceptable.

@HypnoDuke well said and it does okay into possible re-writing of Matt to make him more of the ideal good boy Daddy likes. Not to mention they already act kind of cold like especially if you look at the Good Boy Handbook Series this is based off. Sometimes they can l act like excited children over a small thing and the idea of drinking juice boxes is a total infantile move which was established in both series. You can do juice from a bottle and a cup but the box already implies it. I will say the story does feel like it's taken a few turns though with chapter 8, 9 and now 10 all having a slight shift. At one point it felt like Lucas was in trouble for being a bad boy with Nicholas and forgetting about Matthew in one chapter and not to mention Matthew getting in the basement. However he seems to not behaving as I think one of the good boys should that would be in his predicament as he seems pretty much the main focus of a relationship going forward. However it sets up in one chapter that Lucas messed up big but nothing major came from that didn't see what felt like punishment or a season with Daddy. In fact it was business as usual next chapter. In fact Daddy has barely been involved for about half the story anymore. Then the touches with abdl felt like a slight change as well however I can see where both Daddy being to busy and abdl could tie back in. With chapter 10 it feels like a giant detour that hopefully has a big pay off. Like Chris is brought into the mix of the family or something, a big reveal from another character in the universe that would make sense, Matt gets freed of the Good Boy influence therefore even getting him back would result in ground zero and we'd see the real Matt's reaction to this, or the Daddy character starts getting more involved as this is a Good Son story which implies a father son dynamic that hasn't been seen. However based off the original series and this one Daddy or Dr. Brown is too busy changing the world to be a good dad. I know it's not picking but I kind of helped Swizzington with half that story and many going forward with nitpicking potholes, character traits, character motives, results of actions from both protagonist and antagonist, and pointing out plot from other chapters to get the story to what it was. Which to be fair I didn't have to do as much as it might seem but just occasionally point something out. That said though I am curious to see where it continues.

@SirD yes, someone bought two more chapters this weekend!!

@Jack Parker when will they be posted?? I can't wait!

@northdude101working on it this week

@welan these are commissions so it's up to the clients

@Essex thanks man

@edhypnofan Definitely love to focus on stage show things even more prominently in a lot of my other stuff. I kind of imagined the 'tist probably wouldn't even make much use of the financial/personal info, just got off on collecting it and having it around if he ever got in a scrape. I don't necessarily see him bleeding the guy dry or anything - more symbolic, if that makes it any better.

@Reader Well spotted. No spoilers though ;-)

@Reader I've been doing my best to act as punctuation police, but I'm sure I've missed some or muddled things in revisions! I love long stories, but the curse of them is it takes a lot of time and effort to edit them! Inevitably a few errors slip through. If you can point out an example or two, it might help me to be extra vigilant in future.

@Lloyd Irving Sorry for the delay, it has been (and still is) an extremely busy week. It is nothing big and as you said, in long stories you just can't find them all. I will find some examples tomorrow and show it to you

@Feed Your Head I'm actually a hopeless romantic at the same time as being a sadist putting my Thong Fags through all sorts of trouble XD. Zeus is such a daddy to the himbos and takes care of them, despite them getting themselves into mayhem. I've really enjoyed playing with the idea of "straight to gay" and what makes someone gay or straight. Glad you've been enjoying the introspective in this series.