@Evan right? I love the idea of being trapped in a memory you can't get out of.

Thanks, @silverstat! I guess it’s pretty clear that I was just as into writing this commission as you were into reading it. There were a lot of the same themes as in my personal writing…

Thanks so much, @dredlifter! I was fortunate to have a commissioner who wanted a much longer story than my usual, which meant I could really luxuriate in the TF descriptions and world building. Two more chapters to go, with the last one being a lengthy examination of the aftermath. I think you’ll be pretty happy with the results, especially Tariq’s. His TF goes to a pretty wild extreme.

@phillipsm isn't that the magic of writing fiction. I hadn't even thought about Mike when writing the first 2 chapters of the series and now he's become the heart of the story. Same for Zeus, who began life as just a way to get the boys gym equipment but now he's turned into the muscle dom daddy with the heart of gold. I honestly didn't set out to write a story with this much heart in it, but it seems there is a big demand for stories like this with equal parts horny action and introspection. I have ideas for new stories after I'm finished with Thong Fags that at the moment are just penis fuel but I wonder what will happen as characters start to come to life! So glad I started writing this, especially with kind comments like yours.

@GoonNoob I love a smutty story as much as the next reader don't get me wrong. But what I really crave most is a well-rounded narrative with a good balance of horny action and heart. While I can't speak for others, I can say with all certainty that I'd love to read more stories like this if you were so inclined to write them.

@Anonymous completely agree with that statement. I wear a jockstrap out proudly when I'm in a club, but thongs are still a taboo secret for me, and I feel like such a slut when wearing them. Also, the feel of the string between my cheeks is a constant reminder, whereas I can forget I'm wearing a jock.

@Bluedegascar ABDL (adult baby diaper lover) is a fetish about an adult acting and presenting as someone in the baby/toddler age range, pedophilia is not an aspect, as the key part of the fetish is that it is seeing an adult act in these ways. Keep in mind when pointing fingers and kink shaming in the way you are, it’s very easy to do the same with hypnosis - for example, in hypnosis/mind control/brainwashing stories, there’s generally a lack of informed consent, no informed consent before sex is a type of rape, this is why we acknowledge these as stories, as fantasies, but know in reality this would be wrong. I think you may want to do a bit of self analysis before you go shaming peoples kinks.

@HypnoDuke Very well said. It's fine to say "This one makes me uncomfortable, can't get into it." but some self-awareness is in order. Given the array of kinks on this site, singling one out and saying that the people into it are bad is really not acceptable.

@HypnoDuke well said and it does okay into possible re-writing of Matt to make him more of the ideal good boy Daddy likes. Not to mention they already act kind of cold like especially if you look at the Good Boy Handbook Series this is based off. Sometimes they can l act like excited children over a small thing and the idea of drinking juice boxes is a total infantile move which was established in both series. You can do juice from a bottle and a cup but the box already implies it. I will say the story does feel like it's taken a few turns though with chapter 8, 9 and now 10 all having a slight shift. At one point it felt like Lucas was in trouble for being a bad boy with Nicholas and forgetting about Matthew in one chapter and not to mention Matthew getting in the basement. However he seems to not behaving as I think one of the good boys should that would be in his predicament as he seems pretty much the main focus of a relationship going forward. However it sets up in one chapter that Lucas messed up big but nothing major came from that didn't see what felt like punishment or a season with Daddy. In fact it was business as usual next chapter. In fact Daddy has barely been involved for about half the story anymore. Then the touches with abdl felt like a slight change as well however I can see where both Daddy being to busy and abdl could tie back in. With chapter 10 it feels like a giant detour that hopefully has a big pay off. Like Chris is brought into the mix of the family or something, a big reveal from another character in the universe that would make sense, Matt gets freed of the Good Boy influence therefore even getting him back would result in ground zero and we'd see the real Matt's reaction to this, or the Daddy character starts getting more involved as this is a Good Son story which implies a father son dynamic that hasn't been seen. However based off the original series and this one Daddy or Dr. Brown is too busy changing the world to be a good dad. I know it's not picking but I kind of helped Swizzington with half that story and many going forward with nitpicking potholes, character traits, character motives, results of actions from both protagonist and antagonist, and pointing out plot from other chapters to get the story to what it was. Which to be fair I didn't have to do as much as it might seem but just occasionally point something out. That said though I am curious to see where it continues.

@SirD yes, someone bought two more chapters this weekend!!

@Jack Parker when will they be posted?? I can't wait!

@northdude101working on it this week