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edhypnofan
3/26/22, 12:07 PM
Another great story although I'm always a sucker for the stage show side of things. Not sure I like him being a financial victim but particularly loved the suggestion he'd be jealous of his wife.

3/26/22, 8:49 PM
@edhypnofan Definitely love to focus on stage show things even more prominently in a lot of my other stuff. I kind of imagined the 'tist probably wouldn't even make much use of the financial/personal info, just got off on collecting it and having it around if he ever got in a scrape. I don't necessarily see him bleeding the guy dry or anything - more symbolic, if that makes it any better.
3/26/22, 7:59 PM
I just realized, Liam is wearing a golden cock ring, just like in the legend!

3/26/22, 8:13 PM
@Reader Well spotted. No spoilers though ;-)
3/21/22, 8:19 PM
I really liked this chapter! First of all I got some hope back which is very nice, and that Slate chapter was so satisfying! I thought it might have been too much, but nope, he brought it on himself. The dickhead is a genius revenge. I was sad and angry about Liam's father (can't Liam claim that his father "used his property without permission" or something? Sure, it would be ugly, but if I got the sense of the world right, it could work), but I expected that something will take a turn for the worse (too good to be true). I really liked the half breeder and half bull tropes they were colorful in a dark place. On a different note, some times you have some slipups with the punctuation, which aren't something big but they can make the reading a bit funky. I wasn't sure if I should tell you but I thought that I would have wanted to know so... (but other than that great job!!)

3/22/22, 4:34 AM
@Reader I've been doing my best to act as punctuation police, but I'm sure I've missed some or muddled things in revisions! I love long stories, but the curse of them is it takes a lot of time and effort to edit them! Inevitably a few errors slip through. If you can point out an example or two, it might help me to be extra vigilant in future.

easdf
3/26/22, 7:56 PM
@Lloyd Irving Sorry for the delay, it has been (and still is) an extremely busy week. It is nothing big and as you said, in long stories you just can't find them all. I will find some examples tomorrow and show it to you
3/26/22, 1:35 PM
This is the best chapter yet! I absolutely LOVE Mike’s perspective; you perfectly capture his trepidation and fear during his first time, and it makes him seem so human, and his determination to make Brock feel good and cared for is beautiful. And the fact that he and Brock are falling in love is surprisingly sweet in a story that features a massive gang-bang. Speaking of which, I also love how Zeus repeatedly shows concern regarding consent (him getting angry about the confession video—and his major concern being the boys’ safety and privacy—is a perfect example). And finally, we have the bizarre nature of Jason literally taking dozens of cocks, but still getting embarrassed about the idea that Brock might be gay…the cognitive dissonance is so rarely made the focal point of these stories. In short…incredible! You are an amazing author! :)

3/26/22, 7:21 PM
@Feed Your Head I'm actually a hopeless romantic at the same time as being a sadist putting my Thong Fags through all sorts of trouble XD. Zeus is such a daddy to the himbos and takes care of them, despite them getting themselves into mayhem. I've really enjoyed playing with the idea of "straight to gay" and what makes someone gay or straight. Glad you've been enjoying the introspective in this series.
3/26/22, 7:18 PM
Wow,that was WILD. Great second chapter,need more!
BottomBear29
3/26/22, 7:10 PM
This is the best story on here I have read in a while. I check everyday for another chapter. I love it. It’s so well written, descriptive, and hotter than hell!!

3/26/22, 7:17 PM
@BottomBear29 I've literally been up all night, wearing my thong and horny as hell writing to get the chapters out asap! Glad you're enjoying it.
3/26/22, 2:42 PM
Another fantastic chapter. I'm glad the boys have a more... above the table job. Seeing the progression of these boys has been fun to read.

3/26/22, 6:48 PM
@Timet above the table, on the table, under the table. Where-ever really ;)
3/26/22, 6:46 PM
Hottest thing I’ve read in a while. The slow burn is absolutely killing me

3/26/22, 6:48 PM
Thanks @SwimJock! Hopefully I’ll give you a spectacular “climax”, heh-heh…
3/25/22, 10:27 PM
Definitely interesting, but the trash part was a turn off.

3/26/22, 6:24 PM
@PupTari13 hahaha, yeah, that was pushing it even for me, I'll admit.
3/26/22, 4:05 PM
Nice story, I'm a sucker for straight guys turned gay :)