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3/26/22, 2:16 PM
Love the series. Hoping you continue
3/26/22, 1:46 PM
UNF so much this!!

Kyle Cicero
3/26/22, 1:48 PM
Couldn’t have done it without you.@Jack Parker
Kyle Cicero
3/26/22, 1:45 PM
Pix too..thumbs up. Among other things “up” lol

3/26/22, 1:45 PM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man
3/26/22, 1:34 PM
Great story, love the subtle bits of reality changes. Hope you continue it
3/26/22, 12:59 PM
I’m so sorry I didn’t fully read this earlier. I liked it despite a little grossing out out those massive breakouts on the skin. Would like to see it continue.
3/26/22, 12:31 PM
Always anxious for more from the golden pen of Jack Parker.
3/26/22, 5:51 AM
For some reason, the description didn't really appeal to me, so I'm only just reading this story now, and I like it a lot. I will admit, however, that at the end I was waiting for a turnabout twist that never came. I think it wouldn't make sense to have Barry hacking Gulliver's TAG, as nothing in the story indicates he has those abilities, but I personally would have loved an ending where, say, the doctor or the company itself takes control of Gulliver's TAG, reducing him from puppet master to puppet.

3/26/22, 10:44 AM
@Hypnothrill You’re two chapters ahead, but I’m glad you liked it.
David
3/26/22, 10:39 AM
Great chapter! I need to go back and read the others
3/26/22, 9:39 AM
Oh no! Poor Chris. Although...I can't decide who I'd rather wanna be,him or the hypnotist. Great story,I love these oblivious suggestions and humiliation
3/26/22, 8:06 AM
Fucked up. It turned me on.