Recent Comments

3/26/22, 4:05 PM
Nice story, I'm a sucker for straight guys turned gay :)
3/26/22, 3:59 PM
I thought there were some fun ideas in this. Especially early on when the initial changes happen and neither the protagonist or the reader really knows what's going on it was just pretty fun and mysterious. By the end it a little bit reminded me of a horny version of the Russian fantasy novel Night Watch.
3/26/22, 3:06 PM
Really great story
3/26/22, 2:16 PM
Love the series. Hoping you continue
3/26/22, 1:46 PM
UNF so much this!!

Kyle Cicero
3/26/22, 1:48 PM
Couldn’t have done it without you.@Jack Parker
Kyle Cicero
3/26/22, 1:45 PM
Pix too..thumbs up. Among other things “up” lol

3/26/22, 1:45 PM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man
3/26/22, 1:34 PM
Great story, love the subtle bits of reality changes. Hope you continue it
3/26/22, 12:59 PM
I’m so sorry I didn’t fully read this earlier. I liked it despite a little grossing out out those massive breakouts on the skin. Would like to see it continue.
3/26/22, 12:31 PM
Always anxious for more from the golden pen of Jack Parker.
3/26/22, 5:51 AM
For some reason, the description didn't really appeal to me, so I'm only just reading this story now, and I like it a lot. I will admit, however, that at the end I was waiting for a turnabout twist that never came. I think it wouldn't make sense to have Barry hacking Gulliver's TAG, as nothing in the story indicates he has those abilities, but I personally would have loved an ending where, say, the doctor or the company itself takes control of Gulliver's TAG, reducing him from puppet master to puppet.

3/26/22, 10:44 AM
@Hypnothrill You’re two chapters ahead, but I’m glad you liked it.