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3/26/22, 12:07 AM
Love that he took his balls! What a great twist...great work!
3/25/22, 11:50 PM
Different, but I loved it
M_S
3/25/22, 11:17 PM
Can you manage another chapter continuation?
3/25/22, 10:47 PM
O_o more! And where does the latex shoot from? 😁😁🤤🤤
3/25/22, 5:50 AM
This was just great. Please, please hurry with further chapters. You are so talented. One thought: Might the father and (soon-to-be) son cops become devoted to breaking the law, and turned on by carrying out Vicente’s reprehensible schemes? For instance, if some guy complains that the hypnotist is eyeing the kids at skate park, the Doyles come to “interview” him seemingly in their official capacity but really on behalf of Vicente. Out of uniform—but with their guns—they can rob drug dealers, etc, turning over the cash to their master. The more evil and uncharacteristic their actions, the more aroused and mentally enslaved they become. …A la BoydWunder’s “To Protect and Serve.” https://mcstories.com/ToProtectAndServe/index.html In other words, make it a little darker. But you know what will work best for you.

3/25/22, 8:10 AM
@Bigmac I almost exclusively write happy people. I have a lot of difficulty going dark and it doesn't feel right to me. If you're looking for darker, though, Edlam writes in a very similar style to me and he'll go a lot darker than I do. About the best you might get out of me is the father dutifully taking a report of Vicente being creepy and then throwing it in the garbage. That said, Vicente is pretty creepy, so you're probably not wrong in where things would ultimately end up if the story continued into the future...I just won't be the one writing that story. Sean actually becoming a cop is beyond the scope of the story as I've planned it. That subplot is more something to enhance the fact that the brothers are very different from one another yet actually coming together in spite of Vicente being who his is. But it's also there for people like you who want to imagine where things might end up going in the future. I need to focus more on Web of Trust and other stuff I have in the works, so this story will be limited to the weeks immediately after the father's vacation.

3/25/22, 10:40 PM
@RobinHood70 Thank you for replying--and for your reading suggestions. And of course I now intend to enjoy your other fine stories.
Tgay
3/25/22, 8:43 PM
This has been a great story and I'm enjoying some of the homophobes having a change of heart.
3/25/22, 7:24 PM
Please continue this!!
Anonymous
3/25/22, 6:56 PM
Well, this just violated several health codes.
3/25/22, 5:13 PM
So fucking hot 🔥
3/25/22, 2:21 PM
Wow. Very hot second chapter. I’d love to read more.