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3/26/22, 1:34 PM
Great story, love the subtle bits of reality changes. Hope you continue it
3/26/22, 12:59 PM
I’m so sorry I didn’t fully read this earlier. I liked it despite a little grossing out out those massive breakouts on the skin. Would like to see it continue.
3/26/22, 12:31 PM
Always anxious for more from the golden pen of Jack Parker.
3/26/22, 5:51 AM
For some reason, the description didn't really appeal to me, so I'm only just reading this story now, and I like it a lot. I will admit, however, that at the end I was waiting for a turnabout twist that never came. I think it wouldn't make sense to have Barry hacking Gulliver's TAG, as nothing in the story indicates he has those abilities, but I personally would have loved an ending where, say, the doctor or the company itself takes control of Gulliver's TAG, reducing him from puppet master to puppet.

3/26/22, 10:44 AM
@Hypnothrill You’re two chapters ahead, but I’m glad you liked it.
David
3/26/22, 10:39 AM
Great chapter! I need to go back and read the others
3/26/22, 9:39 AM
Oh no! Poor Chris. Although...I can't decide who I'd rather wanna be,him or the hypnotist. Great story,I love these oblivious suggestions and humiliation
3/26/22, 8:06 AM
Fucked up. It turned me on.
3/26/22, 7:55 AM
I consider it kind of separate since almost all the characters are different. It's not really "another chapter" but a sequel. Though obviously it's possible to argue both ways.
3/26/22, 7:51 AM
Fuck, whatever portal the world flew through to cause every man around him to thrust their dicks up his ass, I want some of that! 🤤🤤

3/26/22, 7:51 AM
@NeedControlling Ev has a fuckable quality lol
Martin
3/26/22, 7:31 AM
Is this meant to be a separate series or do you want it to be joined with Dinner Date in a single series?