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5/6/22, 6:21 PM
I'm excited for another round of this super fun story! πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

5/6/22, 11:32 PM
@NeedControlling Thanks! πŸ‘ŠπŸΌ
5/6/22, 11:27 PM
This chapter is even better when you know what’s coming!’
5/6/22, 11:22 PM
And as before, it just gets better and.. Bigger!
5/6/22, 11:08 PM
Returning to this story, it still is the best I ever read. His unending thirst for power is just amazing. You are such a gifted writer!
Muscle-Flex
5/6/22, 6:39 PM
Another excellent chapter. Don't worry about the length. Your chapters should be whatever length it takes to tell the story as you want to tell it. The combination of perspectives is fun! And now that the Doc has left a text telling Markus what he is going to do to him, we get to watch Markus struggle and try to resist! The ear buds.... Did the Doc put some kind of special earbud into Markus's ears the last time he had him in the medical exam room?

5/6/22, 7:16 PM
@Muscle-Flex I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter ^^ I always get a little worried when my chapters don't do too hot. However it's great to see that some people enjoy my story. And in terms of the earbuds, will, was it the first or last doctor visit. Who's to say πŸ‘€
5/6/22, 6:57 PM
Well... I like it the first time I read it... and still like it now :3 :blue_heart: :blue_heart: :blue_heart: I know is notnyour style to be dark and twisted, but I really like what you did here ^ ^ amazing, I love it :3 <3
5/6/22, 6:15 PM
Good for Brian's girl Shell have fun training him for Preston
JD1
5/5/22, 7:46 PM
Miss you <3

Adonis
5/6/22, 5:38 PM
@JD1 I miss me too
chen
5/6/22, 1:56 PM
Highly creative, solid writing

5/6/22, 5:16 PM
@chen Thanks so much for the comment. It is appreciated.
5/6/22, 2:49 AM
This was so hot. And a great foundation for a future story. I can't wait to see what happens next One thing I'm wondering, what will the kinky punishment be? I can see it being an ironic punishment. Like it's based in whatever punishment you lost at. However, It could also be something completely different Like what if the loosers are sold off as slaves to pay for the winner? Maybe even the runner up. Like "here's your 50'000. Unfortunately, as your now this fine gentleman's slave, it will be going to him" Idk, just what I thought of as I read. Can't wait to see where this is going. And I hope some foot fetish, socks/shoe fetish is involved at some point. That's my favourite. Or maybe being trapped in latex would be a good fetish to involve. Who knows. Your the author so we'll have to wait and see what you decide

5/6/22, 4:50 PM
@Rubber_Lover Love your comment. Tysm and glad you enjoyed! Their will definetly be various types of kinks down the line!