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3/19/22, 7:53 AM
The disclaimer about the one with the Inuit and Scotsman is just as long as the actual limerick xD

3/23/22, 6:10 PM
@xXxMonsterFuckerxXx Well, _you_ try writing 1000 words of limericks in one day without padding a little here and there... ;)
3/23/22, 4:57 PM
Love the whole series. But, this was one of my favorite chapters. Love Erik Von Detten and putting him with Marc Blucas, awesome. Thanks
RJG
3/23/22, 4:12 PM
This was excellent! Even started zoning out from the rhythm of the words as I was reading
3/23/22, 3:43 PM
I Love this story great job!! the humiliation was great! will there be a chapter 2??
Cracker
3/23/22, 3:27 PM
F-ing s**t Jack.
3/23/22, 2:57 PM
What a fun little story! The twist works well. :)
3/23/22, 2:02 PM
As always, love the surplus of cum. Although I’m worried about Jack blackmailing him or something. I guess we’ll see!
3/23/22, 1:58 PM
“What have I become—“ I think Everett is finally starting to figure things out, heh.
3/23/22, 1:56 PM
Tentacle-adjacent porn is always so damn hot! And this was awesome, and I loved how there was an positive ending—wholesome endings are always my vibe (and maybe you should add the “wholesome” kink?). The only thing it’s missing is cum inflation. In my extremely biased opinion, no tentacle story is complete without it!
3/23/22, 7:53 AM
Another excellently written chapter and an interesting development to the story. I'd echo a lot of what has already been said, this was an unexpectedly dark departure from previous chapters and not exactly something to "jerk off too". That said, from a technical perspective this was a clever contrast to show how Jason and Brock have changed and as a way to move the narrative forward towards whatever end you have in mind. It really speaks to your skills as an author more broadly and not just as a smut writer. After what the boys had to go through in this chapter I really hope they get to have a proper happily ever after ending.

3/23/22, 11:24 AM
@phillipsm I've been reading a popular GSS series that's on going atm, that goes into some dark territory and I think it might have rubbed off on me 😅. Buy I'm glad that while it's not to everyone's fap tastes people are appreciating the writing & storytelling. I can promise a happy ending, but not necessarily the same ending.