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3/23/22, 1:58 PM
“What have I become—“ I think Everett is finally starting to figure things out, heh.
3/23/22, 1:56 PM
Tentacle-adjacent porn is always so damn hot! And this was awesome, and I loved how there was an positive ending—wholesome endings are always my vibe (and maybe you should add the “wholesome” kink?). The only thing it’s missing is cum inflation. In my extremely biased opinion, no tentacle story is complete without it!
3/23/22, 7:53 AM
Another excellently written chapter and an interesting development to the story. I'd echo a lot of what has already been said, this was an unexpectedly dark departure from previous chapters and not exactly something to "jerk off too". That said, from a technical perspective this was a clever contrast to show how Jason and Brock have changed and as a way to move the narrative forward towards whatever end you have in mind. It really speaks to your skills as an author more broadly and not just as a smut writer. After what the boys had to go through in this chapter I really hope they get to have a proper happily ever after ending.

3/23/22, 11:24 AM
@phillipsm I've been reading a popular GSS series that's on going atm, that goes into some dark territory and I think it might have rubbed off on me 😅. Buy I'm glad that while it's not to everyone's fap tastes people are appreciating the writing & storytelling. I can promise a happy ending, but not necessarily the same ending.
Evan
3/23/22, 12:52 AM
I love this series. This was a departure from the other characters who are making these two feel good while getting to use them. The corrupt cop abuse may show up later in the story but for now it felt a bit disjointed. Granted, there ought to be consequences to their actions and I am enjoying how they can barely go a few hours without needing to be naked in only a thong and pleasure their holes. Honestly, while I love that the boys cumming from shame and humiliation, the bullying negative insults rather than deliberately humiliating teasing from Zeus and Hiro was less fun for me.

3/23/22, 10:46 AM
@Evan it gets back to being more fun from here don't worry. There's still hyjinx & humiliations to come come but this is as worse as it gets and there's alot more sexy muscle himbo to enjoy
3/23/22, 9:52 AM
mmmm, so masculine!
3/23/22, 6:57 AM
Fucking hot!!
Anonymous
3/23/22, 6:10 AM
hot. loved the pink lace panties part. nothing hotter than a former top stud who's rock hard, turned on and leaking into slutty lace panties.
Anonymous
3/23/22, 5:48 AM
Great story, nice build up and use of imagery.
3/22/22, 9:47 PM
Just reread this and it's still as sexy now as it was then.

3/23/22, 5:19 AM
@Heru Kane Such a nice thing to read today. I always thought this one must have missed the mark or something, because it rated lower than others, but it's always been one of my favorites. Glad you like it. :)
Ember
3/23/22, 3:44 AM
so happy to see you back! great chapter, as always~