Recent Comments

3/22/22, 10:18 AM
Unfortunately no action with the teacher It goes too fast Pick up the line that his prostate is too small and needs training Let the character of Everett develop not rush into things
Anonymous
3/22/22, 6:03 AM
i'd be hot if Jack ended up wearing slutty panties/lingerie. he'd be so humiliated and turned on, he'd be a bitch in heat begging for it.
Wolfpup
3/22/22, 5:49 AM
Love me some hot sweaty bear man
3/21/22, 5:09 PM
Hell, I would love to see this become a series!

Anonymous
3/22/22, 12:19 AM
@FlashThanks, that it is encouraging. What was your favorite part of the story?

3/22/22, 5:12 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) The part where he grows his prey before sucking it dry.
3/21/22, 4:24 PM
Can't wait to read more sexy time of the prince with those hot frat boys

3/22/22, 4:57 AM
@Baekhyun It'll be coming up soon! I'm looking forward to getting out more content for this story; I just have The Making of a Godfather on my plate and it's been taking a while. Thanks for reading, though! And please rate if you can!
3/22/22, 2:49 AM
This is the perfect series set up, I always love a good demon corruption.
Not thrilled.
3/22/22, 2:03 AM
Nope. Total turn off. Too mean of a concept, too underserved by the number neighbor. Out of the blue theft. Just made me angry. What an ass. I wish literary death and disaster on the thieving character and his accomplice friend.
3/22/22, 1:15 AM
Great story! So awesome I hope there will be more! Thank you! :grinning:
3/21/22, 11:51 PM
The abuse in jail, especially the racial abuse, is a turn-off for me. But your writing is good, and Iike the overall idea of these perfectly built straight guys becoming slaves to their holes. I'm rooting for Mike to have his way with both of them! And maybe some other innocent teenager from the neighborhood with a big cock and a wandering eye. I want to see Brock and Jason corrupt others, even fulfill some gay boy fantasies, as their needs for cocks in their holes grow. That story turns me on.

3/22/22, 12:05 AM
Hi @wdcyg016, thanks for your honest criticism. This is my first published story, so I'm still learning to balance my own sexual interests with what I'm seeing the readers enjoy as well as write a compelling story. I think when I wrote the darker elements of this chapter, I forgot 'oh yeah, people want to masturbate to this' so I'm glad that you are still enjoying the overall narrative despite this. If you're rooting for Mike you're gonna love Ch7 where he really takes centre stage!
Tanner
3/21/22, 11:15 PM
Really love this story. It’s super hot. Particularly like how you play up the fact that Joe is only 19 and dominating someone much older. Thanks for writing it and please keep going.