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3/21/22, 4:24 PM
Can't wait to read more sexy time of the prince with those hot frat boys

3/22/22, 4:57 AM
@Baekhyun It'll be coming up soon! I'm looking forward to getting out more content for this story; I just have The Making of a Godfather on my plate and it's been taking a while. Thanks for reading, though! And please rate if you can!
3/22/22, 2:49 AM
This is the perfect series set up, I always love a good demon corruption.
Not thrilled.
3/22/22, 2:03 AM
Nope. Total turn off. Too mean of a concept, too underserved by the number neighbor. Out of the blue theft. Just made me angry. What an ass. I wish literary death and disaster on the thieving character and his accomplice friend.
3/22/22, 1:15 AM
Great story! So awesome I hope there will be more! Thank you! :grinning:
3/21/22, 11:51 PM
The abuse in jail, especially the racial abuse, is a turn-off for me. But your writing is good, and Iike the overall idea of these perfectly built straight guys becoming slaves to their holes. I'm rooting for Mike to have his way with both of them! And maybe some other innocent teenager from the neighborhood with a big cock and a wandering eye. I want to see Brock and Jason corrupt others, even fulfill some gay boy fantasies, as their needs for cocks in their holes grow. That story turns me on.

3/22/22, 12:05 AM
Hi @wdcyg016, thanks for your honest criticism. This is my first published story, so I'm still learning to balance my own sexual interests with what I'm seeing the readers enjoy as well as write a compelling story. I think when I wrote the darker elements of this chapter, I forgot 'oh yeah, people want to masturbate to this' so I'm glad that you are still enjoying the overall narrative despite this. If you're rooting for Mike you're gonna love Ch7 where he really takes centre stage!
Tanner
3/21/22, 11:15 PM
Really love this story. It’s super hot. Particularly like how you play up the fact that Joe is only 19 and dominating someone much older. Thanks for writing it and please keep going.
3/21/22, 11:01 PM
The control Joe's developping and how comfortable he is in ordering Jack around gets better and better
3/21/22, 10:01 PM
I love this whole story. How their bodies are so hot they dry themselves after getting wet, how muscular they are, how dumb, and how sex crazed they get if they go to long without pounding their holes. Now that they have lost their motorbike, what will they do? Can’t wait.

3/21/22, 10:58 PM
@Beaner and they're only going to get more hot, more wet, more muscular, more dumb and more sex crazed.
3/21/22, 6:27 PM
A dark chapter Indeed. Every interaction with Adams made me feel uncomfortable, and I really hope karma is swift with that piece of garbage.

3/21/22, 8:57 PM
@Timet I suitably cruel fate for Adams is exactly what he deserves and I gleefully looking forward to writing it.
3/21/22, 5:58 PM
I admit this chapter was difficult to read, but in a good way. You did an excellent job making Adams completely horrific—what a terrible human being. I had to skip over a lot of the scenes because his idea of “fun” was so sickening. You did a great job, though, of balancing that with fun descriptions (as a guy into blond himbo surfers, Brock’s description is…MMMMMM) and the London scene. I also love how you contrast the caring domination of Zeus and Hiro (yes, they dom the boys, but they’re loving and supportive) with the genuine cruelty that Adams shows—it’s an important distinction. I do hope that Adams gets his just deserts! Until then, great job. :D

3/21/22, 8:53 PM
@Feed Your Head glad you are enjoying the story as a whole even if this chapter wasn't completely to your taste. I really wanted to show how lucky they were to have men like Zeus and Hiro, when there are men like Adams who would definitely take advantage of the boy's hyper sex drive. The cop will definitely has it coming, but in what cruel, ironic way remains to be seen.