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3/21/22, 11:51 PM
The abuse in jail, especially the racial abuse, is a turn-off for me. But your writing is good, and Iike the overall idea of these perfectly built straight guys becoming slaves to their holes. I'm rooting for Mike to have his way with both of them! And maybe some other innocent teenager from the neighborhood with a big cock and a wandering eye. I want to see Brock and Jason corrupt others, even fulfill some gay boy fantasies, as their needs for cocks in their holes grow. That story turns me on.

3/22/22, 12:05 AM
Hi @wdcyg016, thanks for your honest criticism. This is my first published story, so I'm still learning to balance my own sexual interests with what I'm seeing the readers enjoy as well as write a compelling story. I think when I wrote the darker elements of this chapter, I forgot 'oh yeah, people want to masturbate to this' so I'm glad that you are still enjoying the overall narrative despite this. If you're rooting for Mike you're gonna love Ch7 where he really takes centre stage!
Tanner
3/21/22, 11:15 PM
Really love this story. It’s super hot. Particularly like how you play up the fact that Joe is only 19 and dominating someone much older. Thanks for writing it and please keep going.
3/21/22, 11:01 PM
The control Joe's developping and how comfortable he is in ordering Jack around gets better and better
3/21/22, 10:01 PM
I love this whole story. How their bodies are so hot they dry themselves after getting wet, how muscular they are, how dumb, and how sex crazed they get if they go to long without pounding their holes. Now that they have lost their motorbike, what will they do? Can’t wait.

3/21/22, 10:58 PM
@Beaner and they're only going to get more hot, more wet, more muscular, more dumb and more sex crazed.
3/21/22, 6:27 PM
A dark chapter Indeed. Every interaction with Adams made me feel uncomfortable, and I really hope karma is swift with that piece of garbage.

3/21/22, 8:57 PM
@Timet I suitably cruel fate for Adams is exactly what he deserves and I gleefully looking forward to writing it.
3/21/22, 5:58 PM
I admit this chapter was difficult to read, but in a good way. You did an excellent job making Adams completely horrific—what a terrible human being. I had to skip over a lot of the scenes because his idea of “fun” was so sickening. You did a great job, though, of balancing that with fun descriptions (as a guy into blond himbo surfers, Brock’s description is…MMMMMM) and the London scene. I also love how you contrast the caring domination of Zeus and Hiro (yes, they dom the boys, but they’re loving and supportive) with the genuine cruelty that Adams shows—it’s an important distinction. I do hope that Adams gets his just deserts! Until then, great job. :D

3/21/22, 8:53 PM
@Feed Your Head glad you are enjoying the story as a whole even if this chapter wasn't completely to your taste. I really wanted to show how lucky they were to have men like Zeus and Hiro, when there are men like Adams who would definitely take advantage of the boy's hyper sex drive. The cop will definitely has it coming, but in what cruel, ironic way remains to be seen.
3/21/22, 5:19 PM
I’d really love to see adams discover one of the thongs himself

3/21/22, 8:42 PM
@EvanIshihara96 it would be a sweet irony.
3/21/22, 4:16 PM
So alot of stories have a chapter of like darkness abefore getting back to the fun and light, and this is one of those. It's not really to my interest for all that it's just as finely written as the others. I will say I kind of want Adams to get mind fucked into a cop pup. But yeah I'm interested in more of what came before and what comes next then the events here. That said the image of them butt to bars was quite hot.

3/21/22, 8:42 PM
@Heru Kane you know what they say, you've to got experience the lowest lows, to fully experience the highest highs. Thanks as always for your honest feedback. Don't worry, Adams will get his comeuppance but sooner or later but he doesn't deserve to be a blissfully dumb, thonged himbo. Makes you wonder what other brain-bending delights Dubcon Corp is working on...
3/21/22, 8:14 PM
So insanely hot, and I love that one of them is wearing a rugby shirt -- they turn me on like crazy!
3/21/22, 8:00 PM
Oh my gosh I need to see more of this.