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3/21/22, 7:24 PM
So glad you're posting again !!! Love your stories. This one is another great start !
3/18/22, 2:59 AM
Wow we might need to add a new voting icon category for humor/wit! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

3/19/22, 12:16 PM
@Nocturne13 YASSSSSSSSSS

3/20/22, 7:04 PM
@Nocturne13 I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I see you rated it five 🤣, haha!

3/21/22, 7:01 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Yes!
3/21/22, 3:54 PM
I wanted this to happen to me and was terrified of it at the same time. Bravo author.
3/21/22, 3:38 PM
I love the premise, but I hope we'll get to see more resistance from Justin's father and brother when we get to Part 2. To me, the demon seemed a little too powerful, and his powers kept expanding, to the point where I didn't really understand why he needed Justin's help to recruit this new gang. It would also be cool to show some more mental corruption in Part 2; maybe Justin and his friends would take on new "bad boy" personalities that would worry their friends and families.
3/21/22, 1:26 PM
Really enjoyed and would love to be able to explore this more
3/21/22, 1:15 PM
Well, this was the hottest _fucking_ thing. Shit. I’d say poor Everett, but he’s having the time of his life. I dunno if Jack’s gay and manipulative or just really, really confused or somewhere in this middle ground of gay and not gay that’s a theme of a lot of your stories, but either way, it’s hot to watch. Also, guilty pleasure is having to swallow so much cum you choke on it. I fucking love cum, so thanks for pushing those buttons =P
Anonymous
3/21/22, 12:48 PM
omg what an amazing story.
3/21/22, 11:19 AM
It sucks that Liam got an ass cunt. I hope he can punish his father one day for he did to Brett. I still don't understand why breeders are second class citizens. No breeders = no babies, extinction. It would make more sense for couple to be equals. One day this society will hopefully evolve to have breeders' right like Woman's rights. I just can't stand what Liam's dad did. Did he hide Liam's mother away and only bring her out to make babies? Seems like most of the bulls have toxic masculinity. I'm glad Liam and Brett are together but I don't understand why Brett's voice had to change. The whole emasculation process is pointless. I wonder how high the suicide rate is in this culture? I bet quite high. I love the small kind aspects of some of the relationships but as a whole this culture is stagnant and doomed. It is an incredibly well written story; all the parts. The story series is brutal but completely believable. I feel a connection to some of the characters and I wish I could make them happy. I hope I would be a kind Bull in this world but maybe I would lose myself in manly hormones. I wish Liam could be fully restored.

3/21/22, 12:02 PM
@Cutlerfan Thanks, there is a lot in your comment and I appreciate it. I am glad you, along with other readers, are enjoying the characters, and care for them. I put a lot of love into the main characters. As for Albion and its strange ways, well, there is far too much in there to unpack in the comments. All I will say is human history to the present day is underpinned by second-class citizens of one kind or another.

3/21/22, 12:43 PM
@Speedychopslover I didn't expect to get so emotionally involved in the story. You are an incredible writer.
Dec 25, 2018
mic
3/21/22, 12:29 PM
fucking hot ideas, stroke it, blow it, fuck it, ,,, -love it, more please, trick train str8 guys, or better friends bros
3/21/22, 12:25 PM
Hot and intriguing, I look forward to part 2!