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Anonymous
3/21/22, 12:48 PM
omg what an amazing story.
3/21/22, 11:19 AM
It sucks that Liam got an ass cunt. I hope he can punish his father one day for he did to Brett. I still don't understand why breeders are second class citizens. No breeders = no babies, extinction. It would make more sense for couple to be equals. One day this society will hopefully evolve to have breeders' right like Woman's rights. I just can't stand what Liam's dad did. Did he hide Liam's mother away and only bring her out to make babies? Seems like most of the bulls have toxic masculinity. I'm glad Liam and Brett are together but I don't understand why Brett's voice had to change. The whole emasculation process is pointless. I wonder how high the suicide rate is in this culture? I bet quite high. I love the small kind aspects of some of the relationships but as a whole this culture is stagnant and doomed. It is an incredibly well written story; all the parts. The story series is brutal but completely believable. I feel a connection to some of the characters and I wish I could make them happy. I hope I would be a kind Bull in this world but maybe I would lose myself in manly hormones. I wish Liam could be fully restored.

3/21/22, 12:02 PM
@Cutlerfan Thanks, there is a lot in your comment and I appreciate it. I am glad you, along with other readers, are enjoying the characters, and care for them. I put a lot of love into the main characters. As for Albion and its strange ways, well, there is far too much in there to unpack in the comments. All I will say is human history to the present day is underpinned by second-class citizens of one kind or another.

3/21/22, 12:43 PM
@Speedychopslover I didn't expect to get so emotionally involved in the story. You are an incredible writer.
Dec 25, 2018
mic
3/21/22, 12:29 PM
fucking hot ideas, stroke it, blow it, fuck it, ,,, -love it, more please, trick train str8 guys, or better friends bros
3/21/22, 12:25 PM
Hot and intriguing, I look forward to part 2!
3/21/22, 9:26 AM
The way that this story just teeters _so close_ to reality gives it a whole new level of hotness. The buildup was done skillfully and I could feel the same anticipation that "Austin" was feeling. Loved every second of it. Great work, as usual.

3/21/22, 11:39 AM
@xXxMonsterFuckerxXx First of all, great screen name! As I mentioned, Peachey and Ford are both friends and I wrote this as an ode. Ford has brought so many people to my stories, he could be my publicity agent -- thank dog I don't pay him a commission fee! (He's going to read these words at some point, and think, "Maybe I SHOULD...")
Anonymous
3/21/22, 9:26 AM
Beautiful. Really quite touching yet incredibly hot!
Anonymous
3/21/22, 2:33 AM
I am still hoping for Brett to get his dick back so he is not just a second class citizen and maybe fuck liam a bit

3/21/22, 6:15 AM
@I mean, admittedly, same. Liam keeps thinking about how in his country, it would be possible. So, would be nice to see. Let them both keep aspects of either side of the coin.
3/17/22, 2:44 PM
Like the author, I've been feeling uninspired by the Turnabout theme. But this totally makes up for it--this story is fantastic, one of the best I've read in months! And I'd kind of love people to take the premises quickly described for the "Uniform" contest and turn them into actual stories.

3/21/22, 6:12 AM
@Hypnothrill Oh I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'm just happy I _was_ able to come up with a story for the challenge in the end, haha. It kind of got away from me as I kept writing it... (Oh, and I'd also love to see other people's takes on the "Uniform" premises—I'm glad those premises came off as intriguing!)
3/17/22, 8:38 AM
So uh....where can I get the first drone gun, the one that turns people into drones like 01110011? you know, for a friend...

3/21/22, 5:57 AM
@Null0byte Ah yes, the Drone-R-Us Blasto Gun! I hear you can get it with a mail-order catalog—though, I'm not sure if they actually still _send_ mail-order catalogs...
PromethiumJPM
3/21/22, 4:05 AM
Hey brother, I made it this far. This story is too long drawn out! Brother, I’m a 58 year old man whose been sucked in your stories, brother this story, to me has “Jumped the Shark” from my timeline. If you need explore it, well brother, this story just went too far!