Recent Comments

3/21/22, 3:08 AM
Really great story and very hot. It's great to see you back, hope things chill irl!
3/16/22, 6:30 PM
the thong fags might be better off selling pics of themselves online soon. they'll make real bank

3/16/22, 6:31 PM
@Timet certainly more easy, moral and fun than petty theft!

3/16/22, 6:33 PM
@GoonNoob and probably more profitable. though they'll likely not be smart enough in the end to really understand anything. gonna need someone to do all the heavy thinking for them. Maybe a muscle God like Zeus

3/21/22, 2:49 AM
@Timet the smartest thing they can possibly do is let Zeus do their thinking for them so they can focus on better things,
3/21/22, 2:41 AM
I usually don't care for 'so dumb they can do gays ex without realizing' but you definitely show you have the skill to make anything hot!
Mar 19, 2022
3/20/22, 8:35 AM
great story! i just ended a 3.5 month chastity stint with this story. felt great. usually I'm not as into women in stories and the stage hypnotist gag, but this was done in such a good way that it was a big turn on. thanks!

3/21/22, 1:18 AM
@BlondieBoy I can't imagine going 3.5 *days* without cumming. Glad I was able to see you across the finish line! ;)
Mar 19, 2022
3/20/22, 2:34 PM
It was so easy to feel what Nick was going through. The second time I read through it, I played along like I was Nick, albeit with a shorter timeframe. Sucking on my door handle, counting my self down deeper and deeper, and dressing up and fucking myself repeating my obedience.

3/21/22, 1:17 AM
@groupple Damn, this I'd have loved to see! So glad you enjoyed!
3/21/22, 1:00 AM
Well, it's turning in the direction I'd more or less been hoping for since maybe part three. It's good, and I'm glad, so glad, there's been some justice meted out. So thank you for that. Now to wait for the next entry as Liam's Loathing continues!
Evan
3/21/22, 12:33 AM
This is a fun story. Maybe our protagonist needs to be careful what he wishes for when change at will is enabled. :)
Muscle-Flex
3/20/22, 11:36 PM
I didn’t know quite what to expect from this story, but it has turned into one of my favorites. Your descriptions and dialogue are great. The humor of the situation adds to the heat. I love the characters and you are spot on with keeping Jason and Brock from being too dumbed down. They don't need to be. Instead, they are just so helplessly horned up (and increasingly muscled up), that they don't have time to stop and question! Judging from all the fans of this story, you have definitely tapped into something or several things that everyone is enjoying! Keep it up!

3/21/22, 12:23 AM
@Muscle-Flex thanks! I really didn't know what to expect the reaction would be, or how much people interact in the comments section but getting a notification on my phone to say there's a new comment is just as hot as writing the story. Glad you gave the story a chance and hope you keep reading!
3/20/22, 6:40 AM
I've been loving this series, and this chapter was no exception! Many of the comments above highlight my compliments. I've been loving Zeus, and Hiro and Mike are great additions too. I love size difference, and the muscle growth has been sexy too. Those big asses are hot as hell. It's so fun to read these chapters like I am tonight, locked in chastity and wearing a thong, rubbing myself while I read stories like this one. Since you've asked others before what they're wearing, this is a hot pink Andrew Christian thong with a poser pouch that pulls my package forward. I do agree with your above comment, since they don't really care about their dicks, locking them in chastity doesn't mean much for your thong fags. But reading these 🥵 scenes, the opposite is true for me.

3/21/22, 12:18 AM
Thanks @Razz TFs, glad your enjoying the story as whole so far and especially the muscle growth. Originally I wasn't planning them to grow muscles super quickly, as I wanted them to at least start as average, but still fit guys. But I wanted them to get muscles over the course of the story and since, for plot reasons, that had to happen over the course of several weeks I had to super charge their muscle growth. Besides, this is GSS, anything is possible and who doesn't love rapid muscle growth? Awesome to hear you wearing a thong while reading (I'm wearing a red g-string today). Can definitely say that my lads won't be locked up but chastity is coming in future stories and, with GSS new photo feature, I can post pics of myself locked up to show my "method writing"
Evan
3/20/22, 4:07 AM
Another great chapter. Thank you. Seeing Hiro take both sides of sex was really cool. I loved the comparison in moaning. And the strange embarrassment criteria for Jason and Brock. That their view of a bottom's cock being exposed and flinging juices everywhere is shameful compared to hidden away in a thong being more proper. The shame seeing them off to cumming is interesting too, and I like that Zeus is smart and figured it out. I am looking forward to seeing how you get Mike to find a way in. He may need to take the initiative or overhear a need for cock to get his smaller top self into those holes since our thong boys are oblivious.

3/21/22, 12:12 AM
No thank you @Evan for taking the time to write a comment. The interactions I have in the comments section really help spur me on and let me know I'm taking the story in the right direction. Mike will definitely get his time to shine, in more ways than one, so stay tuned.